|Reviews for The Grey Crayon|
| Maddi Hatake chapter 11 . 6/29
I LOVED IT!
| ranchan-akari chapter 11 . 5/7
THIS IS PERFECT.
| Venus914 chapter 11 . 3/24
Still one of the best YonKaka stories out there!
| BadgeryFox chapter 11 . 3/20
Aww, what a beautiful story! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/27/2017
This was freaking hilarious! And cute! And so ADORABLE!
I love you for writing this. 3 Keep writing to the end of your days, you're awesome :)
| onyma chapter 11 . 9/10/2017
awww that was the sweetest ever and the children's antics were so cute and funny. and poor itachi, being addicted to icha icha xDxD
| nekolovesyou chapter 11 . 8/27/2017
i love it its cute
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
This is a fantastic story. GREAT JOB!
| Nivell chapter 11 . 12/2/2016
Such a cute, cute story!
| cottonballriot chapter 11 . 10/3/2016
OK. First of: I really, never ever wanted to read a naruto fanfiction with a gay paring. HOWEVER, I started this one and I completely fell in love with this story and even the pairing! So thank you for this lovely tale! 3
| iridescxnce chapter 10 . 6/3/2016
I can just imagine little Naruto and his friends helping Kakashi carry his stuff! Hahaha so cuteee
| Niina Lexy chapter 11 . 5/11/2016
Hi ! I'm sorry, I was too caught up with your story and didn't realize until now that I didn't leave a review, so.. Here I am (a)
I absolutely LOVED it. I really like your way of writing, it's easy to read, but refined, and we completely "feel" what is going on.
Kakashi and Minato were so sweet with one another, I couldn't help but fangirl while reading those cute moments between them, and the way they thought about each other : they kept thinking that they were a nuisance to the other and that they were the only ones to care, when really they were crazy about each other, and, and, (goes screamingin a pillow) hum. Yeah. I don't have words. I love it. You really did great, because usually I can't read a story about Minato if he's not paired with Kushina !
The children were adorable, and I've always been a sucker for stories where Naruto is still a little kid (he's so cuuuute). And really, thank you thank you thank you for writing about them ! Their friendship was so adorable, Shikamaru and Chouji made me laugh so much when they realized that Kakashi was Naruto's mom and kept giving him ideas, and then Sasuke came along and "Just lock them together", as if it was the most natural solution xD Seriously, I love how they are all in character while still being so young ! And Naruto and Sasuke's friendship is soooo cute together ! I wish there were more moments like that between them in the manga ! When they fought and Minato asked Naruto if Sasuke was his friend, and Naruto just rolled his eyes, because "Sasuke is my BEST friend, duh", I couldn't stop laughing because of the cuteness x)
And finally, I don't know how you came up with all those ideas, but My God it was so messed up ! Poor Kakashi suffered sooooo much ! D'you have something againt him or something ? xD
Anyway, thank you so much for this story, it's pure gold ! I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews, you'd definitely deserve it ! Thank you again, I keep smiling like an idiot thanks to you ! It's just so funny and heartwarming and all, so, yeah. Keep going on :D
| My Soul is Spartan chapter 11 . 12/12/2015
This story is too precious for the world! I haven't read something so cute in a while and this is just wonderful
| Angel Fantasy chapter 11 . 12/11/2015
DAAWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE! I loved every part of this - and you captured Kakashi and Minato's relationship very well. Naruto was the most adorable ball of fluff I ever read about - you caught his character well, too! *favs*
| aewea chapter 11 . 11/12/2015
oh god It was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read!