Reviews for Eve
Samuez chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
It's good.
Sir Soz chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
I'm liking this story, it seems pretty great. Please update soon.
mudpuddledemon chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
Really, really well done. Just lovely.
Corien chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
You have chosen a very difficult story to tell. I can't imagine how I would have written a story that is past, present and future. So far I like Eve, very well told of someone who has just begun to exist. Can't wait to read more!
Greenhemoglobin chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
artfully executed!
abigail chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
looking good
Superdani4Ever chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
i like it!

please update soon!
Belibali chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Good. You have the watchmen style perfectly. Does eve look like laurie ?
Sias-in-time chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I am really excited to see how this story goes, i like sort frequent updates. i can't wait to see more of your style, and how you write for John, it think it is really interesting to play with :)
Ravenwisker chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Can't wait to read more! Very interesting so far.
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
That's cool, I really like it.
AnonyMiss731 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I love this concept. Please please please make more chapters. _
lucidliar chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I am interested... Please update soon :)
Raging Raven chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Interesting, please keep going.
Evie chapter 1 . 3/8/2009

I do appreciate the fact that you are trying something different and givin' Jon some attention. Jon creating life is more believable than Walter taking home a random female victim. Just be careful to maintain and work with Jon's disconnected personality, rather than swerving into the OOC domain.
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