Reviews for Checkmate
Medie Shanachie chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
lol did nate miss completely the conversation where eliot says he plays chess? this was great! of course eliot beat him in like five moves. nice work.
slbwhitewolf chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I love it, absolutely brilliant.
tommyhanson chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Wonderful. Absolutely perfect. I was hoping that somebody would do a fic like this, and yours is absolute gold. I hope that the writers take a page from your book and do this on the show next season, because the look on Nate's face would be priceless! ;P
EOshipper2010 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
LOL! See, guys? Eliot's not just muscle! i like it.
EvilspyAchacia chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
That was adorable. I like Eliots characterization.
misssweetsweet chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I can totally imagine Eliot kicking Nate's butt then grabbing a beer and watching the football game. Great capture of Nate's inability to see outside his tunnel.
yellowvalley chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Hee! I caught that, too and am glad you expanded on it. ;)
Goody chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Thank you! I thought Nate was totally condescending when Eliot said he knew how to play chess and Nate just brushed it off! This is just what I needed, a little slap in Nate's face without actually slapping him in the physical face. Wonderful! Thank you!
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