|Reviews for The Devil's Angel|
| SilverShadowKat19 chapter 14 . 12/22/2012
How about she goes with the Devil.
| Edward's spouse chapter 14 . 11/28/2011
excellent. waiting for more. show bella receiving the rest of the elements.
| Monica chapter 14 . 11/27/2011
Wow! It's very good! What is Bella and Edward's relationship? R they mates? What will happened, when the Devil and God come to see Bella about her expiration date? Will she be able to stay with Edward?
| RavenHunter chapter 14 . 11/18/2011
Hey you don't know where to go next right? I have the same problem at times, here is how I get to the next bit of the story.
1. Relax (it clears the mind)
2. re-read the last chapter (something might come to you then)
3. Image you are Bella (what would you think and do if a greek god kissed you)
4. Have fun (if in the end you like the story leave it and post it, edit if you think of something)
5. Don't over think (because then you will have to many thoughts in your head and won't think for the story)
I am happy to be of help, if this helps you, if not well it might help years down the track.
| nemesisofbellin chapter 14 . 12/7/2010
maybe some message from gabriel like devil?
| crazyperson17 chapter 14 . 11/18/2010
have other vamps come
or the baseball game
or maybe the volturi
| crazyperson17 chapter 13 . 11/18/2010
| crazyperson17 chapter 5 . 11/18/2010
she's going to be sucked into it isn't she?
| crazyperson17 chapter 3 . 11/18/2010
| chalk and cheese and jam chapter 14 . 6/11/2010
yea! im logged in now! okay - i can't believe you left it there! there's loads of different ways you could take the story!i f you don't like any of the ideas don't use them - this is your story and if you don't like whats happening you shouldn't let what's happening happen. firstly i think you need to get edward and bella together, then maybe the dude with all the silk shirts - the tracker! (thats it) yeah he should come back and then it's all like the james v edward thing - though edward would totally win (and no i'm not team edward- but that's all i think should happen - take it as many different ways as you want - and don't listen to me if you don't like it, but it all your fault - you got me started on this awesome story. now all i have to do is wait...and wait...and wait...and wait...untill hopefully you update. wouldn't mind if you updated ur other story either. hint hint. love it )
| Born 2 B A Vampire chapter 14 . 6/1/2010
there return home, iv read teh story but i cant recaul, has james appeared yet, or the wolves is Vicky still alive, they can show up have fights, but before that Bella and Edward just shred there first kiss where is Emmet and his jokes about Edwards love life
| Vampz-Iheartu chapter 14 . 5/18/2010
ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY?
PLS UPDATE SOON IF YES
| evfangirl98 chapter 14 . 5/3/2010
i love this story update as soon as ur able to come up with an idea
| ThreeQuartersOfTheWayThere chapter 14 . 2/27/2010
what about they go back to the house and Alice squeals alot and starts talking REALLY quickly, and then we go back to the situation where Bella's expiration date is getting close...okay? x
| cb chapter 14 . 2/3/2010
awesome please please post more really really soon...