|Reviews for Romantical Cats|
| Zabbie Q chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
Review time! (Yeah, I know it's been a while.)
Tension's building. Victoria is discontent; Electra is driving herself crazy; Jemima's casting her eyes on a new tom. It's a pretty good chapter over all.
FFN has some new thing going, so the breaks you had between the scenes are gone now. I've been using xxx personally to separate the sections of my chapters.
"Maybe, if I spent a lot of time with Ademetus, I'd start to dream of him too." I like that. It shows that Electra is trying to rationalize her situation.
"Hmm…I wondered where I could get therapy, without having to explain the details of my situation." Cute.
"Was that true in my case." Did you mean to put a question mark?
"The thought of The Tugger and Bombalurina together makes me cringe." I don't like the pairing either, Electra. (Ha, ha.)
"You too, Pounce." I would put a comma between "You" and "too".
JxP is cute.
| musicgal3 chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
Aw, poor Misto and Electra! ( Hope everything works out okay...
(Sorry for not reading/reviewing sooner...*hides*)
| Cas di Angelo chapter 5 . 1/9/2010
That first review is for the beginning of the story... this one is for the story in general. (I didn't pay attention to what section I was reviewing)
I really like this story! I can't wait till the next chapter is up! *pulls a large cookie out of pocket* Will this help with inspirations for the next chapter?
| Insanemistosingsmore chapter 6 . 1/9/2010
no offense, but canonically, deme would have said thank the Everlasting Cat, seeing as he/she/it is their diety, not god. other than that, this is a fantastic story. J'adore l'historie! (correct me if im wrong, but im pretty sure it means i adore the story.
| Cas di Angelo chapter 6 . 1/9/2010
Before I start (reading, i mean) I want to say that I love your summary. Sir Andrew Lloyd Webber SHOULD be worshiped. Anyone who says different is a drunk, uncultured swine.
| musicgal3 chapter 5 . 9/17/2009
Oh, exciting stuff! Please update again SOON! Stress, SOON! D
| Hazelthorn chapter 5 . 9/6/2009
I LUV THIS!
Please write more soon
| Tantamiri chapter 4 . 7/23/2009
this is pretty random, but i like it
sory about your cat
my cat died a couple years ago..
| black-ostias chapter 4 . 6/7/2009
Electra and Munkustrap? Demeter and Coricopat? This is GENIUS! Why has no one thought of these pairings before?
| musicgal3 chapter 4 . 5/27/2009
Awesome story so far and I can't wait for more. It's very well-written. Switching from first person to third person throughout one story is difficult to do successfully, but you have managed so far to pull it off beautifully. Well done!
| Zabbie Q chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
I am sorry about your cat. It hurts so much when they die.
This is a pretty good chapter. I like that you've put in the Tantomile problem for Electra to be concern about. It was a good choice, and I like how you're weaving the subplots together.
I like how you've written Coricopat and Tantomile in relateable ways. You can see why they both think they are right and the other wrong, and one can find points where one can agree and disagree with both of them. You've been fair to both characters, so to speak, and that is great with writing. :)
I like how you've given Electra temporary peace of mind with the "crush" thing, and I get the feeling that Misto doesn't mind infatuation. "That's what it was for Tugger." Misto seems okay with her liking Tugger, even getting concern when she doesn't seem interested in him (which still cracks me up). If E and M'o are mates, does he get jealous over T?
I noticed in the previous chapter you had Bomba and Pounce together. "Bombalurina stood nearby, looking a little sulky, but in the arms of Pouncival. He'd finally managed to make her his girlfriend." In this chapter you had him have a crush on her, but I'm sure Pounce would still brag about Bomba even when he is in a relationship with her.
I like how you've used the conversation about Munk as foreshadowing. I also like how the MxE thing is currently one-sided. Also, I've read maybe one other fic with Tantomile having a crush on Tugger, and I'm glad that you incorporated it in your story.
Electra's daydream reminds me of how my daydreams turn when I start slipping into sleep. I could be thinking of a story, but then my thoughts take on dream-like qualities even though I'm still awake. So, I think it's pretty realistic that she would lose control of her thoughts.
'She wanted her brother back.'
That's a sniff moment.
'"No idea, somewhere under the boredom of you two talking about Munku's love life."'
Good line. :) I would suggest putting a period after "idea", but I do like that you had Misto say that. It is sarcastic, and you can see his irritation (and possible disgust).
'"Hey Pounce, you hear about Exotica and Ademetus?"'
Funny, Plato. :) I would suggest putting a comma after "Hey", but it's not really noticeable.
"I sat on top the oven."
That made me laugh when I remembered that Tantomile lives there. However, it does tell you how much she cares for her friend.
| Catsgirl007 chapter 4 . 3/30/2009
I just love this story, I just found it today! thanks for taking the time to write it, I'm really enjoying it.
Can wait to see what happens next!
| Zabbie Q chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
Yeah, another chapter!
It's funny that they know something's wrong because Electra's not interested in Tugger. Seriously, I had tears in my eyes from laughing. Reading over this review still makes me laugh.
"but today…well, I didn't need another love interest."
I like that bit.
'"We didn't steal anything." I didn't mention where they got the food.'
That produced a laugh. :)
This is one of the few fics I've found with Pounce/Bomba, so it's interesting choice. Of course, you have interesting pairings in this fic. The little thing between Plato and Victoria was also interesting (I got to get a Thesaurus...) Are you going to expand upon it?
I like the interaction you had between Electra and Tugger. It makes me laugh how she injured his ego (and great job of setting it up).
"Well, jealousy is the first sign of a failing relationship, so I know you'll back to me soon."
That sounds like something Tugger would say. :) It makes me laugh.
As you can guess, this chapter was humorous, including Tugger's excuse for having wet fur. I'd like to see where you go with Electra's problem and how both toms will handle this turn of events.
| Zabbie Q chapter 2 . 3/12/2009
I'd like to see what the next chapter is about.
I like how you protray Munkustrap here. You have a good understanding of his character, and he seems believeable.
I don't think I ever considered Electra and Rumpleteazer being friends; still, it's interesting.
| Zabbie Q chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Interesting start and interesting choice of pairings. I've only read maybe two other stories with the D/C pairing, so it's nice to find another one.
I would like to see what you do with Munkustrap's condition and how you resolve Tantomile's problems.
"This is the way…Demeter would act before a Macavity scare."
I like that pause. It tells you what he's been through.