Reviews for Baby Steps
octoberland chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
Again, very well written and you should continue. May I let you know one thing though?

"Call me sadistic but it was an almost pleasurable pain that I endured."

I think you probably meant masochistic. Sadisitic is when you like to inflict pain on other people. Just letting you know in case you didn't know. :)
Tamikolee chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
I really like what you are doing. Well done.
april black-cullen chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
WOW! That was once again awesome!

For your first fic, that was spectacular! You really have a talent!
iheartcsinewyork chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
Again, WOW! You do an AMAZING job at keeping them in character! My hat is off to you! Keep up the fantastic writing!
ohsynapse chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I think, for your first fanfiction, it's amazing! I can tell you've got some talent. :) Nice work.
folkhands chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
This was pretteh epic! (:

More? Please? *pleads, w/ puppeh eyes*
octoberland chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Are you kidding? This is great. You should continue. It's very well written and very much in character. Good job.
musicalwithfangs chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
omg, you HAVE to continue! this was so masterfully written, and you captured them perfectly! please, please, please write more.

vampire kisses,

musicalwithfangs
Tamikolee chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Hey, I thought you kept the charactters true. Well done.
Magnabones chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
love it!
iheartcsinewyork chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Come out from behind that sofa and jump up and down on it instead! You did awesome! This is so much better than the crazy out of character lemons. I loved that you kept the emotions as a major part of the story. Fantastic, absolutely amazing work! I loved it! :)
deleted0000000000 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Oh my god update super soon!
april black-cullen chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
That was really excellent. Very Edward and in character. You should keep going.
allyoupretentiousvampires chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I like it. very much in character.
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