|Reviews for Naruto The King Of Demons|
| snake1980 chapter 1 . 16h ago
I have to say for the first chapter dam it was great going to check out the next chapter now. keep up the great work
| The Observant Reader chapter 9 . 2/14
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/6
This truly an awesome story
| Wrandral chapter 1 . 1/15
Ok that was nice.
Though there are a lot of typo error and butchering of grammary but hey it's one of your first stories and you progressed since then .
I'm not sure what to say about inner Moka and Mizore falling that fast for Naruto, i mean if they were humans yes but considering they're yokai their values aren't the same. The kinship between Naruto and Moka, Naruto's natural Alpha Male aura and charisma added to his kind, supportive and mischevious personnality ( and his looks since Tsukune is a drab pussy who only manned up near the end of the manga ) combined with his power make him a very attractive mate ( especially since he's a Kyubi ).
I'm usually not fond of naruto stealing the original MC's love interests but with Tsukune i'll say it's quite welcome XD
| lou2003us chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter!
Keep up the great work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Too rushed and why would anyone have sex with someone they just met? unless u a hoe but that don't count. make it believable and i think it would be better
| darknessword chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
Okay I'm having a hard time following parts of your story. for example, toward the end of chapter two there was a sentence that read
: "moka and kushina were the two people he was willing to kill stay keep"... do you check this stuff before you publish it or are you submitting the unedited rough drafts? Seriously I am curious because it doesn't look like you check your own work...
| darknessword chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Just as a side note, I hope everyone realizes that the way naruto and moka got together in chapter 1 would never actually work. Don't go trying any of that for real or you're liable to get smacked and end up with a shook imprint on your nuts...
| voidprince chapter 9 . 12/10/2013
Good story just wish it updates faster
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 9 . 12/9/2013
not much to say, decent chapter, only found one error,
you used "hearth" instead of what I assume to be heart at one point, that is unless the women really likes that aspect of architecture :P
| naruto saiyan00 chapter 9 . 12/9/2013
good story, looking forward to reading the next chapters
| shadow12 chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
Finally an update! Ive been waiting forever for this! Only problem is i hotta go back and read this all over agin cuz of how long its been since the last.
Also noce twist with little yuna-chan, though i figured it would have been something like that. I also see that your grammar is getting better.
Please update soon.
| evil-pain chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
Omg I'm so happy to see you updated this story awesome chapter
| Shiki Ouji sama chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
| Crazy dog chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
Great story and Hope to see more soon.