|Reviews for To Love an Enemy|
| Jedzie chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
| rainbowjellyfish chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Well you already know I like it-good changes! It has very nice flow! :-) I love the feeling of realizing you're in the past without your having to state it so obviously. Very nice move!
Just a thought-re-rad for spelling errors and one question: Do you think you should bring up Monique's feelings so soon? I would think a surprise (such as when I first read it in later chapters) might be more effective?
| dragonlady chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
hi love your story when are making a another chapter