Reviews for Persona 4: Simulacrum
Dark Naruto chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
I have to admit, when i first read the summary, i wasn't at all interested in reading the story. But your idea of a new mystery waiting for Souji in the form of memory loss and everything is quite awesome. Now i can't wait for the next chapter to show up. Great job!
RyougaZell chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
Ouch. Souji was completely fooled. Double ouch.

The frustration the team has been feeling reflects on Rise's reaction upon seeing Naoto. I think she blamed herself, but couldn't vent it until she tried to vent on someone else. And she felt guilty afterwards.

For a moment I thought Kanji was returning, and yet he left again. How was he safe? Because he is still under the influence of the Memflies?
Queen Sydon chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
Absolutely bloody fantastic. Probably the best damn Persona fic ever written. Damn you've got some skills!
cncgamefan chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
I wonder if they'll actually be able to rescue Souji
BonusParts chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
Great chapter! Nice struggle between Souji and his Shadow-self, and its/their confrontation with the rest of the team.

I'm very curious about Margaret, now, and kitsune. I want to think that one of them is related to Chisato somehow...but that doesn't quite fit.

Glad to see that the whole gang is almost together again, and that they're none the worse for not having had Naoto with them earlier. Good that she's back and in true form.

Terrific chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
SamJaz chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
Oh, SNAP this is getting good.

Now, one way to fix it would be to summon Minato. But that would make a much less interesting story, what with the deus ex machina and all.

Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 13 . 8/9/2009
The story is cool and interesting, I can't wait to see how it will end.
Nick chapter 13 . 8/7/2009
Well, I must say, the story was professionally written, but had flaws throughout and several misspellings.

I actually like your personal take on the epilogue of persona 4, actually giving Souji a personality, instead of this blank canvas like in the game.

The ending was a disappointment for me, as it did feel like a satisfactory ending, but in the end left me hanging and wanting more. I do hope you continue, and actually give some closure to your story arch.
Nasar7 chapter 13 . 8/2/2009
This is the first Persona 4 fanfic I've read and I've gotta say its an absolute pleasure to read. I think you've really captured the essence of the characters well, their dialogue feels like it could've come straight out of the game.

I'm not really sure where the story is going next with Souji/Shadow Souji fused into one being, but hopefully the real Souji will come out on top. Nice touch with Namatame being able to see his compendium and being impressed: it's true after all, Souji is crazy powerful as it is already. But no one else really realizes the extent of it yet except for Namatame. Hope to see more on that later.

One more thing, Souji/Rise is the way to go! Yukiko and Rise were definitely the canon choices as far as love concerns went in the game but as far as this fic goes, I think Yukiko has had her time ;)
chariot330 chapter 13 . 8/1/2009
Great story...I'm sure that I can't write a fict like this,ever!

Please update soon...You'll make me die if you don't.

I'm still curious about shoji...
Individual Twelve chapter 13 . 8/1/2009
Well, I started reading this last night, and kept on reading until I got to chapter 13, at about four o' clock this morning. And I love it. From the start, it gripped me. And even though I felt sorry for Souji, I loved every bit. I really don't have much criticism at all, and although Souji occasionally seems slightly OOC, I think that you've interpreted him brilliantly. Oh, and Taro Namatame owns. And Shadow Souji. I... kinda want Souji to be with Yukiko in the end, but that's because Souji and Yukiko were designed for each other. In my opinion. Awesome stuff, and I'm already waiting for the next chapter!

(By the way, references to Mystery Food X and Naoto doing a striptease for Kanji cracked me up.)
Sapphire09 chapter 13 . 7/30/2009
This story is awesome! I love every chapter of this. Please continue... I'm really curious of what will happen to Souji...
Krylancelo chapter 13 . 7/24/2009
Scary but very different.
Random Reader chapter 13 . 7/23/2009
Oho... The "ghost of Dojima's wife" is really the goddess, or an agent thereof? Makes sense.

As for this latest turn of events... Well, we'll see what comes of it...
Readasaur chapter 13 . 7/22/2009

okay, is anyone not a prick or depressed in this story?

i don't mean to sound critical, but this seems like it's starting to dip into 'angst for the sake of angst' and ooc territory.

no, check that, it's been like that for a while now with no end in sight.
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