Reviews for Dawn of Fools
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
This seems to be a fun AU, love to see more and now I kinda want to see Cyrus interact with this woman. Given that he probably has the most actual fangirls I wouldn't be surprised if he was the one to receive the most female-attention whenever the space marines are among civillians.
ramsay chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
yeah most space marine deployments are usually long term against orcs having to deploy against 3 different factions across 3 planets with 12 space marines assorted initiates(probably upwards of a dozen) dreadnought is extremely stressful even for space marines also don't forget that local forces are made up of PDF not a guardsmen regiment therefore the heaviest weapons they would have is an autocannon at most and maybe whats left of the 4th company in sector but probably not that much due to them being spread out to fill in for casualties amongst the other companies that were part of the karuvan crusade
Grimmuald chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Lol, hyperactive force commander ftw!
BrazeRancor chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Fools indeed. Pretty clever... although I thought that Cyrus' hair was a little... flamboyant... for a cough*Straight*cough space marine...