|Reviews for Closer|
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 26 . 3/9
Honestly you have a thousand reviews (not to mention this is pretty old) and I know one new review raving about your story will barely make a difference to you but I really absolutely loved your story.
The imperfect mess that was Elizabeth and Darcy captured their characters exactly how I imagine them. The awkwardness, the silence, her passion, his intenseness is absolutely perfect. Some people gloss over their awkwardness while skipping to the love, some make Darcy seem perfect so you end up hating Elizabeth while some make Elizabeth perfect so you end up hating Darcy (much rarer though) but I never saw any of that in your story.
I was cringing at the awkward parts, laughed a few times when something unexpected was said (which is REALLY rare for me since I've read almost all the published modern era books about them and am now hoping to steadily make my way through the better fanfictions) had my heart beating when there was a tense moment, felt despair when Lizzie had her fall and shut my eyes and smiled in contentment when it was over.
Jane refusing to take back Bingley in the start is RIGHT for her character and her admitting her niceness is a fault makes her human.
Lydia never learning is a given, Cat was admiring for breaking out and Ana was a refreshing breeze in this story.
All in all a perfect story for their characters in a modern era which left me with tears in my eyes and a smile that I'm sure will last a while.
I wouldn't be surprised if you were already a published author by now.
| guest chapter 26 . 3/2
One of the best fanfics I've ever read! Kudos
| badcock chapter 26 . 2/15
I loved this! It's the best Pride and Prejudice modern AU I have read. I read it all in two sittings (had to go to work in between). I am now sleep deprived and stiff after sitting still for so long I just had to say that the story is just perfect, loved everything about it. I read P&P first when I was 13 (I am now going on 25) and have read it several times since then and I love the way you stay true to the characters. I'm just going to say it again: PERFECT! :)
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/9
this is such an amazing story. I loved every part of it soooo much. you're an incredible writer! sorry that the review is 5 years late!
| foudroyant chapter 26 . 2/3
This is really really good :D I love this story
| GinnyLumos1197 chapter 26 . 1/8
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story :D Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books :) I'm glad you've done the characters justice :) Once again, great story :D
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/28/2013
Louisa Mara Bingley Jeffrey Todd Hurst Ethan Jeffrey Hurst and Caleb Louis Hurst
(Louisa, Jeff, Ethan, and Caleb)
Caroline Penelope Bingley Kyle Milton Shaw Genevieve Caroline Shaw [adopted]
( Caroline, Kyle, Gen)
Charles Daniel Bingley Jane Olivia Bennet Allison Jane Bingley, Jonah William Bingley, and Leslie Emilia Bingley
(Charlie, Jane, Alice, Jonah, and Leslie)
William David Darcy Elizabeth Elena Bennet Elliot Jasper Darcy and Ava Georgiana Darcy
(Will, Lizzy, Eli, and Ava)
Georgiana Christine Darcy Drew Theodore Timely Prescott Drew Timely, Stephen George Timely, and Grayson Fitz Timely
(Ana, Drew, Scott, Stephen, and Gray)
Charlotte Serena Lucas Collin Abel Perry Delilah Catherine Perry and Roseanne Charlotte Perry, Nicolaus Collin Perry and James Dylan Perry
(Lilah, Rose, Nick, and Jamie)
| mecaka chapter 26 . 12/8/2013
Loved this story so much!
| LucyKatie chapter 26 . 12/7/2013
Don't know if you come back to check these now but just found your story. Wow! Made me cry and laugh, best thing I have read for a long time. Thankyou
| M chapter 26 . 11/1/2013
Thank you for this wonderful story!
| Someone chapter 3 . 10/29/2013
Hello. This story seems really promising, except for one thing. As a doctor it is Darcy's place to explain to Elizabeth the extent of her injuries. Right now it seems that Darcy is either a shitty doctor (resident) or has seriously questionable ethics. Either way, it kind of ruined the story for me ...
| Forbular chapter 26 . 9/30/2013
I dont know how long ago you finished this but after i enjoyed this story so much i couldnt in good concience not leave a reveiw, its one of the best storys i've read in ages, and i dont mean fanfictions, this trumps most romance novels ive read with two covers pages and a price tag. I just wanted to thank you for putting this up and to tell you how much i enjoyed it (you wouldnt beleive how many weird looks ive had from my family whenever i've spazzed out over this) i loved the way you portrayed the characters we all know and love, but with all the detail and emotion you put into this it stands up on its own two legs as a story in its own right
| miriamktr chapter 21 . 9/10/2013
Oh my goodness I love them together!
| miriamktr chapter 20 . 9/10/2013
Oh man she fell? Oh no!
| miriamktr chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
These chapters are so swoon y! I live them, seriously so great!77