|Reviews for Closer|
| guest chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
Look, this scenario is too unrealistic on so many different levels. It's painful to read on.
| kjhgfdsdfghjtr chapter 26 . 5/20/2014
| MayaLala chapter 10 . 5/16/2014
| MayaLala chapter 9 . 5/16/2014
I am getting the feeling you don't know how to write Will.
| Kary Bobbins chapter 26 . 5/13/2014
I know I came late to the party (just 4 years XD) but better late than never, right? :P
I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed reading this :D I spent 3 nights reading all I could until my phone slipped from my hands and fall on my face, then I woken up and continued reading XD I would had reading all chaps in a row, but life it's a bitch who didn't give me enought time :P
I love how you portrayed the characters, with all their faults and not at all perfect creatures like a lot of people like to do. I loved that Jane get another boyfriend, I mean, it's a modern fic! In this days she surely should try to find someone else, even if she not love him and I loved that when Bingley came back she was like "hell no! get out of here dude!" XD I really appreciate that :D
I'm totally gonna pass by your profile later to see what else you had, I know I'm gonna find at least drabbles from Closer, so I know I'll be happy with it :D
So thanks for this good piece, I hope I'll have tons more of you to read (I need to run and check your profile to see if you're still writting, I hope so).
PS: I laughed a lot with Darcy when he shouted the Grey's anatomy thing to the interns XD Doctors really should hate all of that programs right? XD They at least should like scrubs, How could they hate scrubs? :D
| bellachaos chapter 26 . 4/12/2014
Great story! I don't read a lot of modern P&P but I'm really glad I read this. The characters were interesting and imperfect and I think you did a really good job of updating the plot points in realistic ways.
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 26 . 3/9/2014
Honestly you have a thousand reviews (not to mention this is pretty old) and I know one new review raving about your story will barely make a difference to you but I really absolutely loved your story.
The imperfect mess that was Elizabeth and Darcy captured their characters exactly how I imagine them. The awkwardness, the silence, her passion, his intenseness is absolutely perfect. Some people gloss over their awkwardness while skipping to the love, some make Darcy seem perfect so you end up hating Elizabeth while some make Elizabeth perfect so you end up hating Darcy (much rarer though) but I never saw any of that in your story.
I was cringing at the awkward parts, laughed a few times when something unexpected was said (which is REALLY rare for me since I've read almost all the published modern era books about them and am now hoping to steadily make my way through the better fanfictions) had my heart beating when there was a tense moment, felt despair when Lizzie had her fall and shut my eyes and smiled in contentment when it was over.
Jane refusing to take back Bingley in the start is RIGHT for her character and her admitting her niceness is a fault makes her human.
Lydia never learning is a given, Cat was admiring for breaking out and Ana was a refreshing breeze in this story.
All in all a perfect story for their characters in a modern era which left me with tears in my eyes and a smile that I'm sure will last a while.
I wouldn't be surprised if you were already a published author by now.
| guest chapter 26 . 3/2/2014
One of the best fanfics I've ever read! Kudos
| badcock chapter 26 . 2/15/2014
I loved this! It's the best Pride and Prejudice modern AU I have read. I read it all in two sittings (had to go to work in between). I am now sleep deprived and stiff after sitting still for so long I just had to say that the story is just perfect, loved everything about it. I read P&P first when I was 13 (I am now going on 25) and have read it several times since then and I love the way you stay true to the characters. I'm just going to say it again: PERFECT! :)
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/9/2014
this is such an amazing story. I loved every part of it soooo much. you're an incredible writer! sorry that the review is 5 years late!
| foudroyant chapter 26 . 2/3/2014
This is really really good :D I love this story
| GinnyLumos1197 chapter 26 . 1/8/2014
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story :D Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorite books :) I'm glad you've done the characters justice :) Once again, great story :D
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/28/2013
Louisa Mara Bingley Jeffrey Todd Hurst Ethan Jeffrey Hurst and Caleb Louis Hurst
(Louisa, Jeff, Ethan, and Caleb)
Caroline Penelope Bingley Kyle Milton Shaw Genevieve Caroline Shaw [adopted]
( Caroline, Kyle, Gen)
Charles Daniel Bingley Jane Olivia Bennet Allison Jane Bingley, Jonah William Bingley, and Leslie Emilia Bingley
(Charlie, Jane, Alice, Jonah, and Leslie)
William David Darcy Elizabeth Elena Bennet Elliot Jasper Darcy and Ava Georgiana Darcy
(Will, Lizzy, Eli, and Ava)
Georgiana Christine Darcy Drew Theodore Timely Prescott Drew Timely, Stephen George Timely, and Grayson Fitz Timely
(Ana, Drew, Scott, Stephen, and Gray)
Charlotte Serena Lucas Collin Abel Perry Delilah Catherine Perry and Roseanne Charlotte Perry, Nicolaus Collin Perry and James Dylan Perry
(Lilah, Rose, Nick, and Jamie)
| mecaka chapter 26 . 12/8/2013
Loved this story so much!
| LucyKatie chapter 26 . 12/7/2013
Don't know if you come back to check these now but just found your story. Wow! Made me cry and laugh, best thing I have read for a long time. Thankyou