So my first thought was, "Oh noes! Did you injure the model's face and the dancer's leg?"

Now I'm not sure about the first... but oh. Poor Lizzie!

Great chapter. That's a fairly brilliant plot twist.

I love how the entire time Lizzie and Jane are more worried about the other than themselves. You've really done that relationship well.

dude! this chapter was a twist! i though u were gonna follow the P&P plot to the T, but u didnt )! props for getting this chapter out early. keep up the good work and update asap!

Oh. Love it! What an exciting start to your story. Great idea to have Lizzie be injured and Darcy be a doctor. It works.

I'd offer to help with Beta-ing but, alas, now is a busy time in RL. If by chance you still need one by the end of April (though I doubt you'll have trouble finding someone) do let me know, and we can then see if I'm qualified. :)

Looking forward to the next installment!

Interesting change from just Jane being sick to them both being actually injured. Great chapter.

Lizzie a dancer? Jane a model? Charlie an actor? And Darcy a doctor?

I can dig it.

Great start!

Loved this! I can't wait for more! Hurry with the next one! Kate

Great modern version of the Meryton Assembly! Can't wait to read future chapters!

Great start. Love the chapter. I was a little disappointed however when Lizzie didn't throw Darcy's comment back in his face.

*Screams*

OMG an actual dancer piece!

I take ballet but not that good and its more of a fun thing for me. I dont think i can make it. I more of the other types of art but I still like dancing. hard work but enjoyable

you must continue please others have given up when attempting this type...I wil be waiting

dont make me give the puppy eyes!

Very interesting story. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Thanks for sharing your talents here.

I like it a lot. A very good start! Please continue!

This story seems really good so far. I really like the opening paragraph - it was a really interesting way of opening instead of just having speech or a description.

Looking forward for the next chapter

This is really promising...I hope it fulfills its promise with quick and regular updates. Joking...I'm not going to put you in any pressure that might induce a writer's block. But what you did is good, the images you presented of the scene was tight. Every description, even the flowers have significance and relevance. I can picture it in my mind. The dialog is dynamic and flows naturally. I know you borrowed some turns of phrases from the 2005 movie but none of them sticks out like a sore regency thumb. And most of all...you made Darcy BRITISH! It's just me, I think Darcy without the British accent is like sushi without raw fish. I'm looking forward to your next update.

Well done. I'd like to read more!

Please say you'll post regularly. Please!

It was lovely. I always like a story when Lizzy is successful.