|Reviews for The Gathering Storm|
| AnthonyC22 chapter 3 . 1/22
Wait a minute, Mater is the one who's getting carnapped? What exactly is Megatron planning to do with him, since Mater will eventually drive him crazy and have his head blown off.
| AnthonyC22 chapter 1 . 1/22
How did Soundwave transform into a tape player anyways, he's so big. Hehehe, seems like Hicks has fallen to the Dark Side. All ya needed was Palpatine or Vader popping out of nowhere to say that.
| tigerlover101 chapter 5 . 7/30/2014
| Storylady35 chapter 12 . 7/30/2014
I was quite stunned and pleased when I went messing around in the cars crosover section of fan fiction and saw this. I'd read the frist but I didn't know there was a squeal. It was fun, energetic, full of the right level of suspense and drama as well as having the humor of both a cars movie and the G1 transformers. The way you wrote the cybertonian bodies of each resident was clever and I like how you kept everyone's spark the same place. I loved Lizzie and her stinging bumper slap, it was perfect for her.
And the DRH, wow, they were a nasty bit of work.
I know you said there wouldn't be a third instalment and I understand why but I sure do wish there was one.
Anyway, loved it every step of the way and thank you for an amazing story
| BP-101Skyfander chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
Loved it! *claps* Awesome job all the way through :D
| a fan of TF chapter 12 . 11/25/2013
P.S Lighting and Sally's first kid wouldn't happen to be called Daniel would they
| a fan of TF chapter 12 . 11/25/2013
These stories are just prime! this is one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read you are a brillent I look forward to more of your work.
| a fan of both chapter 11 . 5/26/2013
It's frank. That line makes me laugh just thinking about it
| Alliance Empire chapter 12 . 9/1/2012
I wish you'd make a sequal using Cars 2, but if it's your descision, then who am I to judge.
| imaginethat96 chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
If you could see me I'd be giving you a standing ovation. I was hoping in the epilogue for little McQueens or McQueen vs. Blurr but I'm sure if you ever get bored you will make a one-shot ;)
| Silver-ShadowSpark chapter 12 . 1/22/2012
Good ending, although I wanted to see Lighting and Sally's first child(sparkling?).
| Rogue7 chapter 12 . 1/22/2012
Epically awesome :)
I really enjoyed this story and you held the characters true to themselves, well done :)
| Ghost in the Machine chapter 11 . 1/20/2012
bwah hah hah Hah HA! Now -that- was funny. (And I really needed the laugh.) Though I think tractor tipping might become an extinct past time in Radiator Springs as a result. 8)
| CoraxOnyx chapter 12 . 1/20/2012
Well, we got the wedding after all. I was wondering if that was still going to happen.
I find it interesting that the more recent government mistrust of the Autobots made its way into this largely G1 feeling story. It does make for more interesting storytelling, though and I expect the 'bots find it a LOT easier to hide on a planet of sentient machines than they do on our Earth. So, is it a nod to our immigrant tradition that the President of the US is a Mercedes? I thought he might be a Caddy or a Lincoln Town Car.
I also thought it was a fun touch that the Autobots can save badly injured cars, but only by converting them into Autobots. There must be something tricky about just fixing them, as there would be for Ratchet to try and fix a human (recent developments in TF:Prime notwithstanding), so everyone gets the Autobot Spike treatment.
Nice conclusion and I agree that you have done the idea justice. Unless you get some awesome new idea I think you've acquitted yourself very well. Thanks for writing and sharing!
| Mighty ANT chapter 10 . 10/19/2011
...I cannot explain how awesome this story is...
Please update soon!