Reviews for Brothers of The Axe
juliusc17 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I thought that the story was great. My only qualm with it is that some parts are a bit long-winded, so if you could try to cut down just a little. Towards the end I think it's possible that you slipped a little, with the whole 'everyone gets shot' thing, but otherwise amazing, keep it up.