|Reviews for Deidara's past changed tobi into a monster|
| GunGale015 chapter 9 . 6/16
This is a very great story. The part where they ... it really got in my head and you're very good at writing!
| GunGale015 chapter 1 . 6/15
No words just WOW! How did you write this?! It's a bit creepy but otherwise good chapter.
| Rie chapter 9 . 4/25
That fucking ending though! Lol that was awesome!
| Rie chapter 7 . 4/25
NO TOBI! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE DEIDARA! NNNNNNOOOOOO
| RykaRyquni17 chapter 2 . 10/22/2015
OK... I would like to say... Tobi may say his name quite a bit, but it does not mean you type it as much.
This is coming from another author;
Try to use "he" and "him" more often.
Not trying to insult you. Sorry for any offence.
| RykaRyquni17 chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
| AobaLover chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
| feels chapter 9 . 1/15/2014
OMG I love it so cute
| BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
Well, it was cute. I thought Tobi would be bigger than Deidara. hee, hee, hee.
Tobi: shut up.
Me: and this is were I take my leave! *runs away from an angry Deidara and Tobi*
| BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 8 . 4/13/2013
Men prostitution. LOL. Never heard of that before.
| BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Womp. Oh wow, TOBI COME BACK!
| BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
Why must I be the victim of yaoi fever? Why?
| Karen chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Nice story, but when you said "Bakudan, Deidara's food, I don't know what it is" you're showing total lack of common sense. Haven't you heard about Google? Research, research!
| Angle chapter 9 . 6/7/2012
Good but the endding neads some work
| RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
Kinda all over the Place, but nice, i wish you woulda' continued!