Reviews for Deidara's past changed tobi into a monster
GunGale015 chapter 9 . 6/16/2016
This is a very great story. The part where they ... it really got in my head and you're very good at writing!
GunGale015 chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
No words just WOW! How did you write this?! It's a bit creepy but otherwise good chapter.
Rie chapter 9 . 4/25/2016
That fucking ending though! Lol that was awesome!
Rie chapter 7 . 4/25/2016
RykaRyquni17 chapter 2 . 10/22/2015
OK... I would like to say... Tobi may say his name quite a bit, but it does not mean you type it as much.
This is coming from another author;
Try to use "he" and "him" more often.

Not trying to insult you. Sorry for any offence.
RykaRyquni17 chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
AobaLover chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Beginning: *chuckle*
Middle: ...
End: Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
feels chapter 9 . 1/15/2014
OMG I love it so cute
BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
Well, it was cute. I thought Tobi would be bigger than Deidara. hee, hee, hee.
Tobi: shut up.
Me: and this is were I take my leave! *runs away from an angry Deidara and Tobi*
BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 8 . 4/13/2013
Men prostitution. LOL. Never heard of that before.
BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Womp. Oh wow, TOBI COME BACK!
BURU-AKATSUKI chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
Why must I be the victim of yaoi fever? Why?
Karen chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Nice story, but when you said "Bakudan, Deidara's food, I don't know what it is" you're showing total lack of common sense. Haven't you heard about Google? Research, research!
Angle chapter 9 . 6/7/2012
Good but the endding neads some work
RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
Kinda all over the Place, but nice, i wish you woulda' continued!
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