|Reviews for Holly Evans and the Spiral Path|
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 22 . 8/26/2013
Your very own MIND BREAKING fanfiction has achieved WTF status.
WOW I did not see that coming.
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
O.o Is it wrong that I laughed at the OHMIGOD THE QUILL! part?
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
The truth and Firenze's package are both to be treated with caution.
This was...amusing and disturbing at the same time.
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 19 . 8/7/2013
You know, you should tell people in your initial header that you're writing slash instead of hiding the nature of your content. It's intellectually dishonest. Also, the magically augmented seduction of Hermione is no different that the use of gatewaying drug addiction and only maginally better, if at all, than what Flint did to Clearwater. Your Holly character is a nasty evil piece of work how ever you place the mask of 14-year old damaged innocence on her. I offer you bad juju.
| GreatRedBeard chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
I'm going to log my prediction for this story right now: there is no Harry Potter! Either he was killed in the attack, or never existed, but Dumbledore concluded that the best protection for Holly would be an ersatz Boy-Who-Lived to be the centre of public focus.
| NagasMythReality chapter 50 . 6/26/2013
Incredible. This is one of those (few) epic fanfics that best the series. When I first saw this story, I didn't think much of it (sorry), but after the first chapter, the dark humor and (especially) the sarcasm hooked me. Usually the fem!Harry stories suck. The writing, plot... perfect! Love it. And the Spiral Tangents is just a stroke of genius. Can't wait to keep reading the next part :) Just one thing. What about Luna? Will you explain more about her in the follow-up? If not, I'd love to know about how she gets the visions, and if she Delphi reincarnate.
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 24 . 6/24/2013
Oh my God this is so depressing
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 23 . 6/23/2013
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 22 . 6/23/2013
I feel like I somehow knew this would happen, but why did Hermione freak out so much?
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 13 . 6/23/2013
WTF is with Holly laying eggs!?
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
Oh poor Holly :( no one appreciates her
| UrbanChameleon12 chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
I feel bad for Holly. She is facing all of the crap that is meant to be thrown at Harry and she gets so much less respect than Harry ever did for his achievements in canon.
| Bill Everyman chapter 50 . 5/14/2013
I don't say this very often but, this is probably one of the best stories I've ever read on this site
| mantimeforgot chapter 26 . 4/15/2013
The existence of this punishment room would be a death sentence for 90% of the Slytherins currently in existence. Anyone above second year that was somehow party to its use or protecting the secret of its existence: Dead. Slytherin members of the Board of Governors: Tortured before death and then put on display as an object lesson to future generations that some violations are too heinous to allow to happen without absurd consequences.
The only reason why Snape MIGHT get to survive is that it was obvious he was moderating some of their excesses (punishing those who went too far), and his war time activities/importance.
This is a level of betrayal of the value of human life and sentience that is on par with Azkaban. Azkaban is a little remote: outside the concern of the average person, but this is brutal and up front about its iniquity. That reality is a declaration of War if I ever saw it...
| Starfox5 chapter 33 . 3/28/2013
I so wish Dumbledore and half the male characters in the Story would just up and die.