Reviews for Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
dougal74 chapter 12 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 11 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 10 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 9 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 8 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 7 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 6 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 5 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 4 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
Great chapter.
dougal74 chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
Good chapter.
dougal74 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
An interesting start.
Wyte chapter 22 . 6/27/2009
Actually I worded that wrong, I'm too tired hehe. I meant to say, "was I the only one who WASN'T surprised?"
wyte chapter 22 . 6/27/2009
You're story is definitely one of the most original I've read in quite awhile, so congrats on that. On that note, am I the only one that DIDN'T see the harry/holly twist coming?
VladTepes chapter 22 . 6/27/2009
After rereading the last three chapters over breakfast, I have to say, I think that Newt is probably my favorite character from fanfiction, hands down. The slightly mischevious, slightly "obedient/dutiful" daughter personality you came up with for her is absolutely adorable, and perfect in my opinion. Can't wait to see what she thinks of "Uncle Harry" actually being "Mum".

As far as the questions that Harry/Holly would be asking McG, I can really only think of one that I would ask in that situation. "Can I go back to being Holly?" Also, I would not be surprised to see Newt along at the meeting, either as Harry/Holly sneaking her in, or Newt sneaking in on her own.. *grins* Just seems like something that little imp would do.

Very well thought out, and very well written! Keep the excellence coming!
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