Reviews for Caring for a Raven
herm chapter 2 . 10/14/2017
for not being native in English this is very good:)
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2016
That depressing moment when a non-native speaker can write better stories in better English than you will ever be able to
Cloudfire Of SunClan chapter 4 . 1/25/2016
This is better English than I've seen from several native English-speakers. Good job, great story. FLUFFY!
Pouika chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
thank for this story
Pouika chapter 2 . 7/26/2015
THank you, i'm french but i love your 2 firts chapter
missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 5/2/2015
I love this story. I do have to laugh at Snape, who is still plenty snippy and snarky even in his raven form, when he is being so lovingly tended by Harry. Really, if it weren't for Harry, he would probably be dead.

I'm glad, though, that there was finally an eye witness to the Dursleys' cruelty to Harry. How ironic that it was Snape.
icecream and van chapter 4 . 2/16/2015
That was very well done I loved it, could barely tell that English is not your native language
Guest chapter 4 . 2/15/2015
I think that a raven as an animagus form fits Snape's personality very well :) Thanks for sharing this story, and God bless!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/8/2015
I loved this story and I couldn't find any mistakes. Thanks for the wonderful story. It was great!
ripper34 chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
Good story
emthereble chapter 4 . 11/10/2013
i love this fanfic !
Aka-Baka Hoshi 02 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
Well done! I like your story very much! Your writing style is unique, and very good. Keep up the good work!
jeanette9a chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
nice C;
Griffin Raven chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Wonder if the Dursleys would actually leave any food in the cupboards or the fridge for Harry whilst the three of them are going away for two weeks...somehow I really can't see them leaving much food behind at all & would they be as mean as to have the power switch off whilst they were away too? It seems as Harry's more concered for Professor Snape's health in his animagus form of a Raven than he is for his own health since it definitely does seem
as if the poor boy has either caught a cold or the flu which I hope won't turn into pnemonia or something else? At
least one good thing about the whole mess is that Severus has finally learnt some of the truth about Harry's life
& that he's also very like his mother Lily rather than his father James...just has lacked a good role model whilst
growing up at the Dursleys thus having spent more time raising himself?
evans137 chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
Really nice story. I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you! :-)
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