Reviews for Locution
apatheticking chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
It's verbose, nine ways pretentious, and I love it like Joyce loved Ireland! Really solid work that speaks for the talent that some fanfic writers have. Please keep making more of this kind of wonderful work, and screw the audience, real art is made for the maker.
The Soul of Silver chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
WTF is this? I can't understand anything with all ()'s. Also I am very disappointed
8spunkangel8 chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
I like the parentheses and semi-colons; it makes it seem like Kid's mind is running a mile a minute, which it probably is most of the time. I also appreciate the lack of gruesome detail, which in itself adds to the mental and emotional goings-on. A! :)
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Interesting... XD I loved it!
RebeliousRebel chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I am proud of the fact that I understood the meaing of every single word in your story, also, I am very impressed the all the big words you used... Not many people can do that correctly... :P
Timeless Text Traveler chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
This is perfect. I think you captured Kid's OCDness fairly well. :) Keep up the good work.
delax chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Reading this was mind-blowingly* perfect. Many people do forget what Kid has is Obsessive Compulsive Disorder, so it is Always on his mind.

*note: Not really a word.
Skyrere chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
such a fantastic use of the language. I can actually see this as being the way Kid would think... and Patty is the perfect foil for his eccentricities.
reader 0-0521 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Wonderful Verbosity that stimulates all senses to the euphoric end,it pains me greatly to see this jewel among smut and notch
catskid100 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Ill be truthful. half of what i just read... I had NO FREAKING CLUE what it meant! but, i've always had a rather... large vocabulary so this was new to me and actually kind of satifying. mean, now i have a whole lot of new words i have to look up! and when i do, i swear i will pm you and thank you for expanding my vocabulary! and another thing is that the words made it... how should i say it? have a sort of high-class feeling to it? (i cant think of the term im looking for) like, its for people that like to read beauty and not just plain, dull regular fanfiction! this is literature. i really appreciate that you wrote this. its a wonderful peice, and so poetic that i nearly forgot the fact that they were- ahem- doing THAT and payed attention to the writing style! really i loved this. -catskid100 *has to look up those words*
ElsiMate chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
it gave my a hard time understanding but the way you wrote the, well...ahem, it was almost as if I forgot that I was reading such mature literature...beautiful and poetic in short, plus you have great simpler terms: I almost had a nosebleed...but still beautiful work. Immediate fave.
DeathNoteFangirl13 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Really nice! _

There should be more Kid/Liz/Patty fanfics. :D
InfiniteLunacy chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Wow... All I have to say is that its gonna be a disappointment to some hornier readers who just look for something to jerk off to. But it's a great IQ test, I had a hard time understanding it, and I'm at the top of my class...
Mahi-Mahi chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
woah...big words lol, good job!
Harlequin de Rustre chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
It would be wonderful if eroticism would make its debut already...

This pairing makes me giggle on the inside, it does.
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