Reviews for The Air That I Breathe
solemariecullen chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
ohh my goodd! i didnt expect that.. please tell me you are going to update soon. i was partically eating my nails. i didnt see it coming. is she a slayer.. cool! if she is.. i really think their star have to be a little hard and their love intensive.. please UPDATE SOON.
BaconButt chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Bad ass Bella! Nice!
B.Mikaelson chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Ou, I like badass Bella. Update soon plese. _
BamaBabe chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Hot bitch Bella! Rock-on! I can't wait to find out what's happened with her. Keep it up.
Vendell13 chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
WOW- I was so not expecting that. I like bad ass Bella. She will fit nicely with bad ass Jasper. WooHOO! Can't wait to see where this is going. Can it be that she is working for Aro as well? oh, I'm SO excited!
eclipsedbrunette chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
That was an amazing chapter, I can't wait for the update!
Shorty808 chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Bad Ass Fighting Bella YAY! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Gabwr chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Great chapters. I really injoy your dark Jasper. Looking forward to more.
xluvinvainx chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
Great chapter. For a while I was wondering when and how you would introduce Bella in the story. I must say you did a really good job, and I can't wait to hear her story.
Shakari chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
i so did not see that coming! LOVED it! absolutly AMAZING! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Whitlock's Girl chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
OOH! Wow! A new twist. Interesting. I can't wait to find out what Bella is exactly. What was that blade made of? Very interesting. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
SwimmingInTheRain chapter 4 . 3/23/2009
at first i was a little confused as to where bella would fit it but now i get it and its a really got story twist, i cant wait for the next chapter!
SweetT129 chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
Wow, Jasper is scary now. I understand how he got there though, sad as it is. Your story is great so far... hoping for another chapter soon!
mylife9 chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
"control was about denial and the trick to denial was to indulging."

favorite line in this chapter. so nice! jasper lives on pain because that's basically what he's good at and then he gets a mission he just gets through. I'm happy that you didn't have jasper just accept rosalie and emmett back. despite the fact that I adore him, jasper's pain is the best thing for him, at least the way you're writing it. thanks for updating!
T1nkerbell9598 chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
I cannot wait to read more of this story. Thanks, Jennifer
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