Reviews for And Then He Took My Hand Part 1: Emmett
Be.Careful.I.May.Bite chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Awwwww so cute! I always imagened Carlisle caring much more than comes across, so cute!xxxxxxxxx
Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2011
Good grief! Why did you make Edward such an ass? And so rude. A little out of character.
sukkia chapter 2 . 7/16/2010
umm has chapter 2 been change...? I thought it was about carlise comforting emmett of his family
True Colours chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Gah. You are killing my inspiration. I had a fic about Carlisle, but reading your work I'm feeling that it's already been done. You are very, very good. There's just one recurring error (at least, I am pretty sure it's an error.) 'I pulled the chair back up to the boys' head...' If there's only one boy, then the apostrophe should be before the s - 'I pulled the chair back up to the boy's head.' If it was plural - more than one boy - the apostrophe would be after the s.
Torchwood-Babe chapter 2 . 4/16/2010
that was such a cool chapter
ForksintheRoad chapter 3 . 10/10/2009
On Sabbatical is definitely better than "Cancelled," but I am sure sorry that the update wasn't another chapter! Good luck, and hope you are inspired again soon.
DeepCrimson76 chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
NO! Please continue! I liked these stories better than A Place Called Gethsemane (although I like that one too).
temporaryinsanity91 chapter 3 . 10/7/2009
this is so cute. i really enjoyed it. it's so emmett.
Sunshineflwer chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Fantastic! I loved your version of Carlisle changing Emmett. I ready enjoyed Edward's thought's on Emmett's mind.
MyMonkeyMan1995 chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
I think this is a very good story,

i think the next chap you write should be when Jasper and Alice comes. just a thought
AnimeKeepsBreathing chapter 3 . 8/12/2009
I really enjoyed this story are you planning on continuing it?
Elfsong chapter 5 . 5/22/2009
Nice! I love this story. Edward acts like a snotty little twelve-year-old in this chapter! I kept picturing him much younger, then had to stop myself 'wait, no, he's still seventeen'. As for further story ideas, it doesn't have to be a hurt/comfort thing, does it? You could just have Emmett and Carlisle bond over hunting, or something a wife said, or Edward being a brat again, or anything, really. Or, you could have Carlisle unsure about something, and Emmett (being himself) makes it better; lightens the mood or something.

Anyway, once again, I really like this story, and I look forward to reading more.

I now plan to check your profile to see what other stories (if any) you've written for this series. Do you have any from Edward or Jasper's point of view? What about a story about Bella's first days in Forks from Emmett's point of view?
invisiblepen93 chapter 5 . 5/22/2009
GReat JOb! can;t wait to read more!
Breanne chapter 4 . 5/22/2009
You might be able to do an Emmett/ Carlisle chapter for after James is hunted down and killed. I imagine that Rosalie's attitude about helping Bella would be difficult to deal with, and the fact that Edward and Jasper have a lot more to deal with in the situation (worrying about Bella; trying not to eat the tasty human/ remembering his horribly violent past) would probably make him reluctant to even acknowledge that he's having a problem with what has happened.
KittandChips chapter 5 . 5/20/2009
ha, oh poor Emmett ... little does he know how many times he will have to through this. That was a nice idea - Carlisle giving Emmett a family heirloom. And a dagger symbolizing protection was an excellent choice for Emmett.
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