Reviews for Freedom in more ways then One
MaxFangIggyNudgeGazzyAngel chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
I'm not sure what you could do either but I like the story so far. And why don't you have Rogue ask Remy(the one in her head)where she should go since it's his home turf and they meet up in his favorite cafe. Then the assassins and thieves get in fight and Rouge teams up with the thieves. Jean-Luc has already expressed an interest in what she can do and since she knows things she shouldn't so she can't leave. Therefore Rogue and Remy spend a lot of time together and more ROMY. But that's just my idea. I often read stuff and my mind runs away with me, sorry. But I really love the story and hope that you do continue it and soon. Keep writing! :D
roguelover321 chapter 4 . 6/16/2011
please do more

i like this chapter 4 . 4/6/2011
Ummm why dont you make lance use his power then make tías the distraction and when they come out make pietro round them up and then use Wanda and her power then make the brotherhood shake the x-men into what they done and make mystique say it followed by the rest of the brotherhood
msremmi chapter 4 . 9/14/2010
Thank you for such a great story so far. Will Rogue meet up with Gambit. Are the Brotherhood going to damage the mansion? Will there be someone coming after Rogue now that she has control? Will they go after her family to lure her out? Is it going to bring her back into the X-Men fold. Hope to see more soon.
Ella B chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Uh...really tee-peeing and toad-mucus? Why dont toad use his mucus ability thing and cover all the doors and windows so no one can excape, but leave one open so they can get out, and then they can attack the xmen! Hello they are enemies do you think that they wouldnt want to fight? Oh and btw when you write you put A LOT of stuff thats unnecessary like how Rogue sat down and how she ate her breakfast when she was at that hotel. I mean really like half of chapter 3 was unnecessary.
Slurpee-Addict29 chapter 4 . 6/25/2010
what about a huge payback lesson from everyone rogue gave a letter to too show how mad they are
Pixie21 chapter 4 . 4/12/2010
this is a realy good store so far. have Rogue run into both of the guilds are fighting have her help the the thieves.

As for the payback have sum caverd in honey and tide up with bears all around them, some of the guys in womens cloths with pic taken and in the midle of town, Jean's hair being cut off.
Crazyjess09 chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
oh please please update really soon and i hope tht you have it figured it out because i was all excited and at the edge of my seat and everything so i hope that u havent forgotten this and that you update son please and thank you!
AislingSmith chapter 4 . 12/15/2009
I don't really know what much to do other than out do the xmen of their abilites like ganging up on scott unsupectingly when he thinks nothing is going to happen. I'd really like to Scott suffer. Ya it's harsh but I think it would be funny.
Quorinne chapter 4 . 12/4/2009
There is nothing more embarassing than public nudity. With Pietro and Wanda it should be easy. Maybe during a school rally or on National TV so Rogue could see it and laugh.
Ele chapter 4 . 11/27/2009
Hi, thought it was great and i hope you get to add more chapters to this as im im love with it, and im heart broken at the fact you havent had time to continue, i got an idea on what you can do but then my ideas are crap,lol anyway what about you get a pot of honey, feathers and the internet and let your mind go wild, lmao, i made that up right now and its giving ME images, and im the one who made it up lol, thanx for listening to my little (massive) rant, hope ya add more stories, and cya
Dani chapter 4 . 10/9/2009
hey just ta let ya now that ah think ya storees great nd tat ya get ta finish it and ah reallee want ta no wat ya do for the paybak - ah reallee cant think ov a idea for revenge yet ah like the ideas ya cumin up wid ;) cheers cya and hope ta b readin ya next chaptah soon
A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy chapter 4 . 9/28/2009
they could ry freaking them out, like scaring the h3ll out of em! :D i know that kinda sux, but im not very creative right now...


MissCris94 chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
i have a sugestion that they pick out the x-men that didnt get a letter and just came from the danger room sesion and they use wanda to stop any major use of power
JohnPaulGeorgeandRingo chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
I was wondering where you had disappeared to :P

You know, Im probably going to be absolutely no help at all ;)

But it depends on what direction you want to send the chapter in. Do you want humour? Then hilarious pay back and embarrassing situations you need. Or do the brotherhood really want to hurt the X-men? If so then you need to think of a way to leave Scott sobbing in the dirt... Ahem, I really hate Scott as you now!

I told you I wouldn't be any help, I tried :)
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