|Reviews for Unforgettable|
| thetyger chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Aww! This is so adorable! You're such an amazing author! I loved it!
| criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Aw, that was so sweet! I almost feel like I intruded on some private, intimate moment between the two of them. It was so special, honest and pure. I absoutely adored this! I can't think of anything else to say except that I almost cried a bit like I do watching those sappy, sweet scenes in those infuriating LifeTime movies (curse them for being so incredibly sad and sweet and tragic all at once).
Yet another beautiful piece of work *wipes tear from eye* Ehem, well, I think I feel a bit like humming and singing at the moment. I enjoyed this, invading a fictional character's privacy to take part in such a sweet and lovely moment. Excellently written, I don't know what else to say except what I've already said before: you're ability to write the characters so well and true to form amazes and astounds me to no end.
Of to read more now,
| therealesther chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
oh hell to the yes.
again. freaking amazing. loved this. loved it loved it loved it.
this is exactly what i wanted from watching the mentalist. jane is so damaged, i can't unreservedly ship him with anyone in the easy attraction sense, kind of how i felt about Charlie Crews in "Life".
instead, i LOVE moments like these, when the quirky, broken men do something weirdly nice and sweet for the tough, emotionally stunted women in their lives. (the episode where Crews bought Reese lacy purple underwear makes me lol).
and when jane bought lisbon and van pelt the wildly expensive jewellery with his gambling winnings, and he actually tells lisbon how it brings out her eyes! and tonight i watched the episode where jane suffers temporary blindness, and the bit where he touches lisbon and says "i want to see what your face feels like when you smile" :D
omgness. and she SMILES in this totally involuntary way and ALLOWS his touch, and i just totally fell in love with their close, quirky, borderline relationship/friendship.
and you write it brilliantly.
*brb, reading all the rest of your stories _*
| Jinxauthor Mel chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Okay, this seals it; I'm gonna put you on my Favorite Authors list. "
I love this one, as I've always had a particularly soft spot for music and dancing, and you played and moved this moment masterfully. Yep, I do very much want to read more from you. _
| Neoholmesz chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Aw... Almost made me cry, this one did. :) Very beautiful.
| Famous4it chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Aw...Very sweet story, love it.
| Fyoex chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
That was so sweet! Great ficlet.
| BellaRide28 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Aw! So sweet...
| EmmaBerlin chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
This is really beautiful! I wish they would get back to that topic in the show...
| Tutups chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
oh wow, that is amazing, so sweet too my only problem is beleiving jane would do that to lisbon, or that she'd cooperate but it works and it made my heart warm. x
| Santos J. Black chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
So sweet... I love it.
| Fumee67 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
The title fits your story. It's short, sweet, poetic - and unforgettable!
| Sheethkal Shahar chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
New favorite author. Gah, very well done and just so Jisbon and so very well written. I need more compliments. Hah.
| bulletproofweeks chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I'm near tears. Beautiful introduction and analysis. Perfect characterization and the hypnosis was ingenious. Breathtaking story and a real treasure! I absolutely love this and simply can't express it in words. One of the sweetest, prettiest stories in the Mentalist archive and it made me smile. Very well-written. Terrific job.
| Taiji-ya Hawkeye chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
That was SO beautiful. Really. Thanks for sharing :)