Reviews for Second Chances
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 16 . 4/20/2014
awwww! they are just absolutely adorable together!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 15 . 4/8/2014
i love this chapter! i would kill to see the gods and goddesses of olympus curse! lolz keep up the SUPERB work!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 14 . 3/14/2014
omg, she was blessed by the gods! she can freaking see the future! ahhhhh! lol a little melodramatic... great job!

some input, i think that bruce would be a little more 'harsh' towards wonder woman for she broke his heart. after reading and watching all the different batman series (even the ones created in the 50's), i feel that sometimes he has more hate than love (well, isn't that always the case?). well that is up to you when you write more BMWW stories.

FYI, if you feel that bruce is just fine the way he is, that is totally ok, i understand that this is your story and you can create the characters any way you want them to be. don't let other people stop you from writing what you want! (especially me, lol)
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 13 . 3/14/2014
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!
lol i hope doesn't think that i'm trying to spam you!
i really enjoy your story and i hope that you write more like this one for you have completed this story. i love the way you can express every one of the characters' feelings so thoroughly. for me, i usually can't express other characters' emotions as well as Diana's, they usually all start sounding the same... i hope i can learn from you!
great story! one of the best i've read!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 12 . 3/10/2014
me: can someone PLEASE kill her already?!

bruce: of course. *walks over to Dr. Cale*

dr. cale: what the hell are you do-! *dies*

bruce: *wiping his blood covered hands* done.
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 11 . 3/10/2014
wow, major hit and run...

poor bruce... he's gone through so much and then here come diana! sex and all and just up and leaves... harsh...

i'll give him a pass for drinking for one night.
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 10 . 3/10/2014
ooooeeehhhhh... dirty thoughts there marcus pennyworth... *grinning*
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 9 . 3/9/2014
i cried. it was so extremely sad. and he was a flash fan too! ohhhh! *cries really hard*
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 8 . 3/9/2014
doesn't it always end bad when two villains get together? well, we'll soon find out!

great story! luv it 2 death!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 7 . 3/9/2014
oh my goodness! i felt like i was bruce! feeling all the pain, ya' kno'! *sniffles* that can make a bitch cry!

lol so sorry about the whole melodramatic-ness there, i got a little carried away because this story is SODAMNGOOD.
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 6 . 3/9/2014
like the whole 'donna's perspective'. i think it gives the story a different look. i think that having a different person talk about their (tragic) backstory helps with the story plot because they see the two other persons' life differently than the two characters in love.
i hope that i didn't just confuse you... lol
great story!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 5 . 3/9/2014
wow interesting... i have to admit, its a good piece of work!

i sincerely hope that you continue writing BMWW fics. so far, this story is really good!

:D ;D ;P
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 4 . 3/3/2014
i love a twisted plot... lol *making devilish faces*
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
wow intense, but if i may be so critical, i sincerely hope that there will be BMWW in the near future! lol great story!
1st female scarlet speedster chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
wow, thats actually a great background story! i find it interesting and a little twisted, but it actually works! you know, i never thought batman and batgirl would be a... couple?
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