Reviews for Bearing Fruit
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Love how you wrote how Merlin experiences the fruit.
Black Fox34 chapter 5 . 6/18/2014
Loved it keep up the writing. Would love to read a sequel to this story though. To learn how everything goes, and if Merlin and Arthur are a couple and what happens to their baby. A pregnat Merlin. So cute.
kyothefallenkit chapter 5 . 6/5/2014
Haha so adorable X3
Magyar chapter 4 . 6/11/2013
I have just posted a previous review and I just realized that I was just criticizing and listing the faults I found with your story and I would like to apologize, it was not my intent when I began my review!
No matter the impression that your story left me with, I would like to mention that it is very well written and that I am conscious of the effort it must have taken you. And I believe that the result is worth it.
Magyar chapter 5 . 6/11/2013
I don't really know why but I found your story really disturbing.
I think it's seeing Merlin lose control of himself and devour a fruit from an attempt at violating the laws of the universe and expecting it to be a punishment from a deity or something.
I kind of half expected to see some creature leap from his stomach like in the Aliens movies.
Really, I also found the way the fruit hijacked his body and his thoughts (The way he is unable to link a stomach ache to the fruit he ate) to be a violation of the highest order.
I realize that your intent was probably just to describe an Arthur x Merlin relationship and the giving of life, but what was probably supposed to be fluff I found to be really creepy.
Also, maybe you could mention in the summary or in the first chapter that this is a Mpreg story?
Thank you for the story
TheresMusicInMyEars chapter 5 . 12/3/2012
Awwwww that was a sweet ending!
chele the original chapter 5 . 11/17/2012
Wonderful story.!
Fai Gensou chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
Shadow Cat17 chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
I love this story so much!
cho-chan09 chapter 5 . 7/23/2011
No no no! Is there more? There has to be! I wanna know prince or princess too! This was such a delightful fic. _
Mollyone chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
Awww. More! More!
This Account Be Inactive chapter 5 . 3/28/2011
awwww, i loved that!

i think i just about melted at the last line :D

great job.
DevilBittersweetChild chapter 5 . 1/27/2011
awwww! D Cute Ending! ;)
thesagerk chapter 5 . 11/28/2010
awwww i wish there was more! pretty please?
Cross - The Damned Alchemist chapter 5 . 11/10/2010
This is...So very, very beautiful.

I can't describe it any way else.

It touched me very deeply.

You wrote so beautifully.

It's...I honestly cannot describe how I am feeling at the moment.

Thank you so very, very much for writing and posting this story.

Thank you.

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