Reviews for Unraveled Knot
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 7 . 8/26/2012
I take it Edward played in a band and his best friend died? Overdosed?
I'm not even going to bother to address the ring situation since Edward said it himself, he's "soon to be fiancée"
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 6 . 8/26/2012
He's still learning about her? After four years?
He's a wuss!
If Hannah's the one he wants then he needs to commit to that, otherwise he needs to let her go. For both of there sake.
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
Wow, that was both good and bad! He let Hanna drag him out of the pub *smh*
So he wants Bella to be his long lost SECRET friend, that sort of sucks
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
I get the feeling that he's carrying around the ring to propose to Hannah (wich according to the summery he will) but I don't get the feeling that he's in love with her. So why?

Hannah's a bitch!
She's treating Edward like he's a child.

Emmett is in so much trouble *sniggers*
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
I liked that the Heman lunchbox made him laugh, he seems to need it.
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
What's with the ring? Why does it calm him?
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Ok so, Bella is sleeping around and Edward is about to propose to Hannah?
Have they met, and given up on each other?

Edward is sad about a "him" though...
maymay74 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Love it!
helenemc chapter 32 . 6/11/2012
Thank you for a wonderful story. I really enjoyed your writing and how you switched POV. I enjoyed the story tremendously.
angstward chapter 30 . 5/17/2012
I loved the proposal. It was sweet and perfect.
angstward chapter 29 . 5/17/2012
I loved it! What a great story. The song was perfect. Thank you for sharing with us.
angstward chapter 26 . 5/16/2012
That kitchen sex was yummy. Finally they figure out their mess!
angstward chapter 25 . 5/16/2012
Aarrgh. Are these two ever going to iron it out And seriously, what's with the ring?
angstward chapter 24 . 5/16/2012
Well, that was unexpected. So Edward was REALLLLY stretching it when he thought Jasper dying was his fault. Im glad they're back together, though. I still want Rosalie. Angela just doesn't fit.
angstward chapter 22 . 5/16/2012
Well, Renee was a surprise. Who knew she would be the one to tell it straight. well I guess you did. Good chapter. You're right.
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