|Reviews for A new beginning|
| Openhome chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Hey there! Thanks for the awesome review of Singularity! I've dropped by to read yours. You have a very fun and fast writing style, and there is so much humor here! Your style has deepened and improved greatly in just the few chapters you have written, so I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Keep writing, but slow down and give us more details. It is easy to get lost in the action and not "see" the story if you don't slow down a bit. Great job overall!
| insain suicide chapter 6 . 7/18/2009
hey babe this is lil'd here
love the story
come bak to school soon or i'll kill ya (buzzy)
| insain suicide chapter 5 . 5/27/2009
hey write another filler
| CharisClara chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
loved it! made me laugh!
| CharisClara chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
wow! loved it totally! really like the fact that u have written it in fomr jasper's pov!
| SkewyPetal chapter 2 . 3/20/2009
Fantastic!twilight from Jasper's POV. I like the way you started it, not totally the same with twilight or midnight sun. Keep it up! Im looking forward to the next chapter!