|Reviews for Bittersweet Visitors|
| It'smeNaomi chapter 1 . 4/30
It was pretty good for your first . I tried writing but I can't write for shit
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/16/2014
Please update soon. I need to know what happens! Please
| OceanBlueSeaEyes chapter 27 . 2/15/2014
Awesome story by the way those people are just rude
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/25/2014
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/17/2013
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/3/2013
Why a bad ending? I just wasted my time bc it's weird af.
| JamesBond2007 chapter 14 . 7/15/2013
Is she trying to drown herself to death with vodka
| WinterSoulZ chapter 27 . 2/14/2013
Sooooooo where is the ending chapter
| Skye-Blue 101 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Nice description of The Volturi. HA! Old ladies!
| Obscured Angel chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
I ca see the difference between this chapter and the first. Your writing has gotten better.
By the way I think you misspelled 'cloak'.
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
So far it's good and the plot line isn't bad, but the social interactions aren't very realistic and need some work.
| vampiregirl31 chapter 27 . 10/11/2012
i just love it i hope the rest of the story is even better
| TeamAlecVolturiForever chapter 22 . 9/19/2012
Okay I'm not being mean or anything but Bella fainting everyday is kinda getting old.
| Steph A15 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
with just one chapter I have fallen in live worth the story and can't wait to read the rest.
| PaulaB87 chapter 26 . 1/23/2012
awesome looking forward to the next chapter