Reviews for I want
Link0180 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
me again, just read the story again coz i had nothing better to do and i just thought something, what happened between Sinedd and Lune-Zeara's date, coz she sure didn't sound all to happy about the idea XD or maby Sinedd mannaged to interest Luney some how ...just a thought if you happen to write another fic coz im not good at it :P
FemaleSpock chapter 7 . 6/6/2009
After all that they finally completed the deals but it hardly even seems worth it...what a tragedy for Micro-ice and D'jok. Don't worry the ending was funny!
WolfMoonSky chapter 7 . 4/17/2009
The end was funny, also that mark was kissing Mana-ice. i couldn't stop laughing.
waltzing-thilda chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
Aww, pity it's over...

I was expecting the joke with the Shadow ball all along xD

So... the toy was actually a Sinedd action figure or what?
Ghostsammeo chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
at the end when mana-ice and mark start kissing, i just burst out laughing.
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
well de endin seemed a bit rushed ...hehe ok i guess i still enjoyed it tho


Cole xoxo
Link0180 chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
Aww thought the story would last a bit longer, then again it was awsomely funny...i have an idea, make like a second story of "I want" where Thran and Ahito make all the deals.
waltzing-thilda chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
Man you're updating like crazy there days, you you have some slaves writing for you or something?

The drunk scene was perfect!
FemaleSpock chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
Haha, I almost feel sorry for D'jok...almost
Link0180 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
Priceless, absolutely priceless XD, please keep the story going, i have my parents wondering whats wrong with me coz i just can't stop giggleing reading this
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
haha "Micro-Ice requested turning to Kernor while whipping out" i know de 1st ting dat came in ta my head haha NICE ONE!

dun dun dun micro-ice should help D'Jok but its more fun 2 find out wat D'Jok would be like in de mornin LoL

Cole xoxo
waltzing-thilda chapter 5 . 4/13/2009
The ballet fianls... xD lol

So with D'Jok going out with Kernor the circle closed, eh?

I just wonder what will happen when everyone get what they want...
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 5 . 4/12/2009
MICRO-ICE IS EVIL! but i still luv him hehe

D'Jok likes ballet haha dats rich ... im diein here 4 de next update

Cole xoxo
Link0180 chapter 5 . 4/12/2009
wow...i never had anyone do a chapter for me, keep up the good work .
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
haha it just keeps gettin better nd better ... red bull hehe nice one PLEASE TELL ME UR GONNA DRAG DIS OUT 4EVA! LoL

Cole xoxo
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