Reviews for Keeping You Out
tinkamunk chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Keep going!(: its wicked good!
Lucy0Diamond chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
this is really good :), where is the rest?
Ariana Watkins chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Oh, please continue this. I wanna know what happens! Please please, please?
Megoostation chapter 1 . 7/17/2010

I clicked on this story, wanting to read something intriguing.

To be honest, I didn't read it at all.

Too smashed together, and LOOK at the page.

All those symbols.


jessica gleason chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
keep going
A for Antechinus chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Hey this was interesting, thanks for the story. Will you continue? Cheers A
Potterworm chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Your story has potential, but the bizarre formatting really detracts from it. You should glance over it and try to fix it.
LoveOnTheInside chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
The formatting is weird, but I like it. (Always hated Holland's mom)
supercalifragiwatever chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
i loved this book so much and I like what you're doing with it, I like how well you portray the characters, very real. Although, your structure in what you write could be better.