|Reviews for The Piano|
| lucid-lush chapter 1 . 3/21
I liked the idea of this but it would be much better if you wrote more at the end.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
| deleted2012 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Oh, I can imagine Draco playing the piano, and Narcissa's loneliness, and then him asking to get rid of it.
It's a very emotional piece, but I absolutely love "something that was much more alive than the marble hallways or Lucius' stony eyes"
| RavenEcho chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Sad, but I like your connection of the piano and peace.
| Violet Dreams13 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
wow...what an increddibly emotionally filled piece, and yet so short. I love this, it's so sad, you really feel the lonliness and worry of Narcissa.
| AceCade chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
| LadyLilyMalfoy chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Very sad, very beautiful. Very Malfoy
| myppe chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
| Bruteaous chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
You must have more time on your hands these days.
Um, I like it, but perhaps give more finality to it. I know it's just a snippet, but maybe say whether or not she got rid of the instrument, after all, the piece is about the piano, not the war, though through that instrument you have been able to show how the war has come to that household. Still, finalize it if you get the chance.
I liked it, as usual, the potential and allure of your work cannot be denied.