Reviews for Lateral Move
Guest chapter 2 . 5/23
Way to go, Jenny!
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 5/23
Jasmine is adorable. Gibbs is acting up again. OSHA would have a field day with him if someone would report him.
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 5/23
Gibbs was being a spoiled child alright. Besides facial recognition just needs inputting then it runs. Abby could do the other stuff while it ran.
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 5/23
Good job, Ziva. Well done.
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 5/23
Well spoken, Tony.
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 5/23
Good day.
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 5/23
Apparently Ziva's concept of partnership is very different than mine. She should have been upset that Tony was treated the way he was.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 5/23
That could have gone better. Hee hee I am glad Tony told off Gibbs.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 5/23
Excellent. He should have read the one from the FBI as well.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/23
Gibbs' return was not handled well Neither was the team actions while he was gone. Frankly Jenny should make a second MCRT and give it to Gibbs or Tony. My bad would give it to Gibbs since he left making that team number two. Transfer all who want transferred. Then rebuild Team one. Bring in another Forensic Scientist if/when Abby starts favoring Gibbs' Team.
nando2k50 chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
Tony is awesome... So protective of his partner...
nando2k50 chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
"we could order a pizza"... LOL

I can actually see Tony saying that :-)
nando2k50 chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Great Tony in the elevator...
nando2k50 chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
AWESOME...
calileane chapter 11 . 11/24/2012
Hello I found a story wich summary I loved and discovered it had been taken over from one of your fanfictions. So I began by reading your story first.

And what a good time it was I loved your plot and how your wrote the changes in team. And I was happy I'm not the only one thinking Tony's character was wasted later in the tv show. There was so much I could see in Tony. A potential that was not used.

So, I read and fell in love with your story and your writing. ANd then went to find out if the next author was as good. Can I say: thank you so much for letting scousemuz1k take over. There was as much talent from this author as there was from you. And although the writing was different it was no less 'hooking' (it's what I call someone writing when it just hooks me in ) And the plot flow so perfectly with yours I just spent hours reading. I was in reading paradise lol .

Thank you for beginning this fanfiction and letting someone good write more. Thank you for sharing and caring enough about readers that you left someone else write the next part.

With much love :)
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