|Reviews for Rapunzel|
| LotusMundane chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
It started out so lovely and sweet and then it was so painful. This is great. I love the sort of relationship you gave them, the sort of people they are. So believable and wonderful.
| Animefangirl95 chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
This was beautiful!
| RaiNiccle chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Awww... That was so adoraaabbbllllleeeee
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/8/2013
This is so amazing! It's the third or fourth time I read this story. I'm pretty sure I've already reviewed once, but I just can't help it. SPOILER ALERT! I just feel like crying even more, cause I know that this can never happen now that he's dead. RIP Hyuuga Neji. :'(
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
Beautiful! It's one of my favorite fics! I love the way they are so in character. You can write Tenten and Neji really well. For me, the best part was: "because Neji is asking her to 'stop', meaning 'please,' meaning 'don't leave me'."
I actually had to re-read it because it was so great. Keep on writing! I would love to read more NejiTen fics from you!
| Airi Shirokuro chapter 5 . 11/16/2012
I cried. It's so... Perfect. Ugh. My feels.
| BadgerPride10 chapter 5 . 4/11/2012
That story...made me cry...with a smile on my face...*sniff* It was amazing
| Kazahana Yukina chapter 5 . 1/10/2012
This was one of the deepest stories I have ever read, and not to mention one of the most beautiful!
And to think that Neji is a stoic man. Only to Tenten had he done that begging!
| Midnight Insomniac chapter 5 . 12/18/2011
AWW! Beautiful ending. I'm glad Neji regained his sight. :)
| sophia666 chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Beautiful story- I loved how it connected to the original fable of Rapunzel, how organic and natural and fierce Tenten and Neji's relationship is, I loved the little details. How Neji wrote 'Stop' on the scroll, and how well you wrote the Team Gai dynamic, how Tenten used her hair as a signal, that Neji does calligraphy and Tenten gets most of her scars from ironing. Thanks for writing :)
| naash chapter 5 . 11/25/2011
wow i loved how you ended it and i loved the entire story especially the way you twisted the rapunzel theme. i feel tenten cutting off her hair and the way it fluttered to the ground was dramatic and had a lot of visual impact ( great for the imagination).
i feel your writing has matured with time. and you can see the difference from chapter 1 to chapter 5.
as usual, your descriptions are really vivid. you just have a knack for it. and you also have a knack of writing great endings.
write more. i always enjoy your stories.
| Toboe LoneWolf chapter 5 . 11/22/2011
Anything that I can say can be summed up as "garbled profuse mess of omgthisissobeautiful, why are there tears in my eyes, this fic just damn works." There. Saved you a wall of text of nonsensicalness.
Although I will add that when I learned this updated last Sunday I literally, I kid you not, yelled at my computer "OMG NO DON'T DISTRACT ME NOOO DON'T CLICK IT" (click)
So that is why I am late.
| nothingbutblue chapter 5 . 11/21/2011
LOVED this story! so beautiful! and i hope you write more too. i absolutely love to read anything you write. great job!
| ma-chan-chan chapter 5 . 11/21/2011
wonderful, as always.
i have been reading your stories for quite a while now. been waiting for this one, and i'm glad you updated it.
| animesweetie101 chapter 4 . 11/17/2011
Best(worst?) cliffhanger I've read in a while. Please finish! Beautiful story.