Reviews for Missing Scene Progeny & The Real World
redbeanie12 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Another great missing scene! This really gives us a nice idea of what happened after the team arrived back from Asuras. I like how you incorporated the balcony scene between John and Elizabeth from the episode into this story with a bit of tensity to foreshadow events to come - that tensity would have been a nice extra touch to add to the end of "Progeny" to portend at what would happen to Elizabeth in "The Real World," as it would have made these two episodes seem more connected to each other.

You also did a great job in staying true to the characters. It was very much like Elizabeth to dismiss her qualms when the team arrived back and later insist that she finish her work before heading to the infirmary. John's concern for her throughout the story, showing that he could sense that there was more to this than Elizabeth was letting on, was also quite notable ("Something was wrong; he could feel it, but just couldn't put his finger on it. He made a mental note to check on her a little later...").

Again, wonderful work.
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Great story.
lizabeth39 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Sad but beautifully written. Always wondered, how she came from being infected by Niam, to fighting for her life in the infirmary. Well done
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Ohh. That's so sad...