Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For
princessrogue123 chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
wheres the next chapter?
anon chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
This is such a fantastic story! I would love it if you would continue!
rach 'na lasair chapter 5 . 7/4/2011
I wish you'd finish. I love the characterization in this fic. The insights into both Clark and Lois were great and so...real.

The conversation between Lois and the Blur was so tragic and beautiful. I felt so deeply for them. Your writing is great. Period.
1eclecticreader chapter 5 . 6/6/2010
Hmm, I wonder if you have plans on continuing?

Anyway... the story structure is well done. The storyline is compelling. The characters are on point, except for one instance - for me, that is. I'm talking about Chapter 5, during the RBB's decision to take a life. In the show, CK did not advocate killing Davis Bloome at all, did he? So, I'm having an incredibly difficult time believing that he would need to deliberate on this and actually ask LL's opinion on it. And that's another thing, I always thought that she had the same principles as CK's. So I really don't think she'd have agreed with taking a life. Aside from that, the story is superbly written. Great job!
devoted2clois chapter 5 . 11/1/2009
that's really good...i hope ur gunna continue:)

long live clois!

Jess
Ainsley Haynes chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
I really like your story, please keep writing it.
AllyOz chapter 5 . 7/13/2009
ppms :)
Ooh a Jellybean chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
that was a perfect clois chapter. loved the part where clark talks about lois helping him understand what oliver and chloe couldn't. :)
Tanathar chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
When it comes to Smallville, I am not really a huge Lois/Clark fan, but you do it so well. What happened in the introduction lost me a bit - maybe a bit more of an explanation for those who haven't seen Season 8 would be good. But the rest of the story is brilliant. You make the tension between them palpable.
Seersha chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Hey, this was an awesome chapter. i love the growing "relationship" between RBB and Lois. Update again soon please!
lachambre11 chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
It's so wonderful you're updating again, because this story at first drawn me in (my first Smallville one) and then won its place on my heart because of its simplicity and yet, pure poetry within.

I really, really love, and had been waiting for an update for a while, so thank you for it, and for this amazing, heart-warming chapter.
superlc529 chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Wow! I could imagine Lois and Clark's conversation in my head. I'm surprised Clark didn't superspeed back to the Daily Planet and tell her to turn around. She'd probably get mad at Clark for "pretending" to be the RBB or something ;) but he'd prove it. I love this story and your Lois, Clark, Chloe, and Ollie are really in character. Your Oliver is even acting better than the one on the show right now. I can't wait to see the aftermath of the Clark vs Doomsday battle. I hope Clark tells Lois the truth again and I hope to see this story updated a LOT sooner than before!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

CLOIS FOREVER! :) :)
Aaron Leach chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Awesome chapter update soon.
Lily1986 chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
It's amazing how you've turned this once a one shot story into a magnificent chapter fic. Amazing. I'm loving the Bliss...
CuteANDSexxxy17 chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
Great! I really love the Super Clark/Clark Kent and Lois Lane talk, it was really great to know that Clark feels highly of Lois, and even Lois knows she has feeling for Clark AND the Blur.. It so romantic yet complicated! LOL!

Please post soon, can't wait for more :)
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