EmmaWeasley64 chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
5livelaughlove5 chapter 4 . 8/26/2009
omg i just read black is for beginnings and i was like oh no i finished the last book wat do i do now but i love ur story
LibertyOutlaw chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
I think this is an amazing story. Keep writing soon please I want to know what happenes. I had this weird feeling like after she was thinking to herself when she said Jacob where are you? I was thinking she could hear him say im right here and he would be behind her and then she would turn around and someone would be there behind him and he would get hurt somehow and then with her screaming and screatchin noise and she would wake up and she would ask what happened and they would tell her that she passed out in the rain and they carried her up to her bed. So to where everything before jacob said im right here was real. and everything after was a nightmare. just an opinion :) either way im sure it will be great i love your story. :) Check mine out..i posted it but idk if it came up yet, its called Colors are for everything i only have 3 chapters. Idk where its going but it is going :)
Plain Elli chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
I like your story a lot. The only request I'm asking for is to have Jacob pov. Can't wait for the next chapter
SicTransitGloria.GloryFades chapter 4 . 7/14/2009
This is amazing! Update soon please!
Avenging Rose of Death chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
i hope jacob is okay
Avenging Rose of Death chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
dude...that gave me chills
llrandomNESSll chapter 3 . 4/15/2009
Great story! I hope you continue it soon and I hope Jacob's okay and comes back!
Murph16 chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
OMFG you've got me just as hooked on this as I was the actual books! What's with the water...I can't wait to find out...I hope Jacob didn't drown! Poor Jacob doesn't do well with water, apparently! ;P
The Clueless Writer chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
OMJ! If u let anything happen to Jacob I will find out where u leave steal ur computer and rewrite it so nothing happends! I dont have problems... UPDATE
Aiko no Kaze chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
I honestly think this story has some great potential to be well, great. I would seriously consider going on with it :) Hope you do.
The Clueless Writer chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Update soon
Vampir3.S3duction chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Oh my god! Good story! I was literally holding my breath at the end when it said he was behind her! You HAVE to do the next chapter SOON! PLEASE! I will die if you don't, the first chapter got me hooked now, feed my addiction please, lol.
Aiko no Kaze chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
cool so far :) update soon
Murph16 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I loved it, keep writing...left me wanting more! You are GOOD!
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