|Reviews for Right and Wrong|
| fondekit606 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
it flows so easily and both of them are written well, it was'nt forced but effortless. i do enjoy your work! keep it up!
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I didn't think this fic could possibly be this sweet. But it can be, because the water was sweet, wasn't it? Like honey? Killua's ability, to make things sweet.
| Yandere Shoujo chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
I really do think, in your writings case, that Gon is the way he is because of Mito. I mean, it just makes the most sense to me. Nature vs Nurture wars aside, Gon seems like he would be a whole helluva lot more in touch with his feminine side due to growing up around a young woman and an old lady. I also like the subtle understanding of background characters.
It'd be awesome if you wrote a multi chaptered drama where Gon, still in his 14 or younger years, is faced with conflict from Mito. OR with Killua and his family. I mean, since the Zoldicks run on heirs and such, it'd only make sense for him to possibly have an arranged marriage or something.
I know this is old, but if you ever decide to put your heart back in this broken fandom, it'd be awesome.
| Laethra chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Nice story. I rather avoid reading stories in present tenses, even in English, but this particular one I found really good. It's quite an amazing achievement :)
| lifelessmidget chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
awesome story, i love the persona in which you characterized them in. Brilliance :D
| azab chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
i loved it a lot
| heylalaa chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
love this fic, such a great look at their relationship in the future :)
| JBubbles chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Very amazingly well written. And a perfect fic about their relationship... it made me happy.
| CornflowerBlue chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Yayyy! Yes, I love it, I love it! Saccharine, yes...but in a very good, good way, without either of the characters being OOC! As usual, you never fail to amaze me with your stories. :D Write more, GonxKillua! Love, love, love! :D
| Orcux chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
One of the best one-shots I've ever read.
Sweet and innocent - I like it!
| rookie-chan chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Killua and Gon were Killua and Gon. :)
I'm very glad that this is the very first fic I've read in HxH section. :)
| Celianna chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I have never read a story in present tense that actually worked. Congratulations on pulling this off.
I love the way you kind of wrapped this up in only a one-shot. Barely showing any dialogue, but skipping time in huge leaps. I love the innocence of them both, the way you wrote it is the way it should happen. It felt completely natural, and really - really cute.
| Beautiful Taboo chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This is so adorable, it hurts. *SQUEAL*
| RainbowHeart chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Interesting. I like it. I like that you didn't drag it out into various chapters with angst and the like.
Thanks for writing.
I'm going to go read that YYH one of yours.
| jarta chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
i love this story...can you write another one? hehe