Reviews for For The First Time
jeh214 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
this is so good! i cant wait to read more!
Emmy1512 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Wow, this is really good.. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

It moved a bit quickly, but I can forgive that. I know what it's like to have a story nagging at you to be written :p it really is a good story, and great writing :)

Love, Emmy xx
Indredi chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
ooh, I like this so far... you have a nice writing style!

I think you've painted Alice well- completely without memories, driven to hunt as a Newborn, but with visions that give her a conscious lacking in other vampires when they first awaken. I thought she didn't remember her whole name though (?), just "Alice"... though I always wondered why she would remember that part.