Reviews for Visited by a Doctor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update again soon. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a big fan of destiny myself. I do like your Harry's idea about being able to change his future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot for uber long chapters! Hmm, what could he do with fire resistant clothing in fourth year? lol Are we going to see the Crinoth(ian?) stone again? Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() More soon please. Will Captian Jack make an appearence |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter!The Doctor and Harry didnt talk as much as i would like but it is still a lovely chapter,i loved the part where The Master hypniotised most of the school oh and punched Lockheart! |
![]() ![]() Love the way the Master got rid of Lockhart. Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most impressive here, and really enjoyed seeing a Master who isn't so OTT as Ainley made him at times, but much closer to how I see the Delgado Master being. Looking forward to the next part, what Doc is met up with next, and how things will go in Harry's third year, and what might happen if Albus finds out about his friend. One thing that bugged me in an HP/DW cross I read, was the Doctor being intimidated by Dumbledore, and sorry, the Doc's been threatened by foes that'd slap Albus for twinkling at them strange. I'm glad to see this Harry being a bit more judging concerning his friendship with Ron, and what that might mean as the years go on, especially if Ron continues to act his usual self. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, I am very much enjoying this story. Please keep it rolling of the press . . . (as they say). Steve |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great new twist to the two stories. Most entertaining; hoping for much more of this to come. Steve |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant wait for the next! Are you going to have any Companions interract with Harry post Doctor? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love that you put the master in there again! great chapter update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just had the vision of the Doctor going all mother hennish. "What do you mean you were bitten by a basilisk?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful part here, and always glad to see the Delgado Master here, the villain who was a most charasmatic gentle bad guy, classic in that time period, and won't it be interesting to see more of what he's taught to Harry as well. Great to see Jo here, one of my fav companions, along with Sarah, my fav 4th Doc companion. Really enjoyed the Docto learning more, and will be curious to see who shows up next, as well as would really love to see the little 7 just intimidate the heck out of Snape if that's possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not surprised the Master would be more an ally than enemy to Harry. With Voldemort on the horizon and knowing how the Master feels about competition... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please have more Master/Harry Friendship i love it! I love it. Please update soon! |