Reviews for The Day The Earth Stood Still
debslmac chapter 43 . 23h
Loving this. I hope you are able to continue it sometime
millyrose chapter 1 . 3/23
I miss this story! Is it abandoned or posted elsewhere?
Pathatlon chapter 43 . 3/3
FUDGE YOU. Well, not really. But are you effing kidding me? 2014! What the hell! Please PM me ASAP with the entire plot. I need to know what happens. You won't update, but just PM me with what you had planned. PLEASE!
Pathatlon chapter 41 . 3/3
This. Is. Awesome. For some reason I've always loved the Tanya/Charlie thing.
Pathatlon chapter 36 . 3/2
I love the "running sling" details. Such a great idea, and great detail.
Pathatlon chapter 34 . 3/2
I don't mind the sex-talk in the family. We're very open-minded in my family. I guess I just find it somewhat gross that Renee and Phil should hear their daughter/step-daughter have loud, orgasmic sex. I've been very visible in that regard, but it was always strangers who saw me, and I think I would rather have strangers see/hear me having sex, that be my mothers inspiration...

Ahh well, point of view :)
Pathatlon chapter 29 . 3/2
It just occured to me that the only relationship we're missing is Bella and Jasper. Jasper is mostly gone. He's a side note. Rosa and Emmett have large places, along with Alice, but Jasper is just... a side-note :(
Pathatlon chapter 28 . 3/2
That. Was. AWESOME! I've been WAITING for someone to point out that greatness of bringing the deer home for Bella. It's just so obvious! I've never read anyone doing it but this story.

I just read your reviews, and now I worry this story isn't finished. Better go check
Pathatlon chapter 23 . 3/2
I LOVE this. The whole Jacob thing is perfect. Wonderful. Love that you poke fun of Renesmee xD
SnowshoeBombay chapter 43 . 3/1
This is amazing. I'm on my , I think, forth rereading of this and it still delights me to read it.
But I have to make a remark that's in good fun.
Not two and a half, true, at least three instead. I don't know why that makes me laugh.

Anyway, I hope everything's fine with you.
Pathatlon chapter 21 . 3/1
THAT was beautiful. Bella was acting like a bitch for no reason, and Edward reasoned with her easily, and told how uncomfortable it was. It was so REAL. Like, this is what happens in real life. THANK YOU. Awesome.
Pathatlon chapter 12 . 3/1
I Just. CAN'T. Handle. The. Baby. Baby. Baby. God it's annoying. I will persevere, as everything else is awesome. I swear, I just need a program that removes all "baby". Perhaps I should download the fic and remove all "baby". Then it will remove info about actual babies. Gaaaah.
Pathatlon chapter 11 . 3/1
I really like this story, but the sex scenes are very OOC - for your story. They're both virgins, and yet they just jump right into sexy talk and sex.

And then I *hate* the whole "baby" thing. Calling each other baby just seems so slutty, porn-like. Then again, English isn't my native, so that might be the reason.

Anyway, aside from my own personal subjective ideas about sex between two virgins, this story is awesome.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/1
Just found this. I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 43 . 3/1
So... This is awkward. Not two and a half years, eh?
I'm just really wondering if you're going to finish this. I love it so much, so please let us know!
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