i am like four sentences in and i am squealing and giggling! this fic is so amazing so far so i can only imagine the rest is just as good!

A cliffhanger that hasn't been answered in 11 years. I'm dieing rn. Thank you so much for your writing. This story has brought me so much joy! -Golden Girl 2003

Holy guacamole! No! Its been 10 years and no update. I usually dont read unfinished stories for this reason. I am sooo invested in this story and… and…
You are an amazing writer with so much insight into these characters, its like you have insight into them that not even Stephanie Meyer does. Of course, you created some amazing changes to the characters.

Ugh, nothing will compare to your writing. Your detail is extraordinary.

Now, I will begrudgingly go read more of your stories.

Any update on this if you are still writing? I hope so.

Noooo! I need the rest of this, please! I never saw the thing with Charlie and Tanya coming and I need to know what his response is to Edward's question about their bet! I'm highly anticipating the whole pregnancy situation and Edward's first glimpse of their thoughts in utero. I realize it's been 10 years since an update, but if you have anything else written for this somewhere, I would love to read it! Thank you for sharing this much with us, and this is going in my top 10 Twilight fanfics, even unfinished!

We are still here and still hoping :)

He's not older than Esmehe was just turned earlier. Esme is 26! born in 1895, 6 years older than Eddie. Respect your elders ಠ_ʖಠ

"spelunking for condoms" is not a phrase I ever imagined I'd read but made me giggle till I cried like a 12 year old girl so, thank you, I truly needed that lol

This has been such a great ride and I've been so glad to be along for it. I realize it's been a decade, but if you ever do post more, I'll be happy to read as much of it as there is.

Oh my goodness, the dream threesome was amazing!

Enjoying the evolving relationship between Edward and Charlie.

I was not expecting Charlie/Tanya, but I like how it makes things work out! Great twist!

That conversation between Edward and Charlie was brilliant. Love how by the end Charlie was just like, so, I can get venison out of this?

I love the idea of Rosalie and Jacob bonding over cars, and especially of Rose being motherly towards him.

Love seeing Jacob getting to know Edward early in this non-hostile context. Yes, the mythical creatures should stick together :)

Good to see Edward actually taking Bella's discomfort with his running seriously, rather than going, "silly human, stop worrying."

The original baseball nomads sequence was so frustrating, because Edward knew what the tracker was going to do and that they were going to have to kill him, and they didn't just do that in the field. I'm glad to see that fixed here, and the added justification of B being James's singer fits.