Reviews for The Day The Earth Stood Still
Siver L.S chapter 33 . 4/7
Tattoos would be erased during the transformation from human to vampire, but ok.
Siver L.S chapter 1 . 4/5
Love it! I always wanted a fic if Bella wasn't a shield or a full shield and a singer. So many problems could have been avoided. But I still expect the "woe is me, I'm a monster" Edward to show up from time to time.
And the outrage about Bellu having “fangirl thoughts”... well, yes. This is canon. There's a little too much here from the very beginning. This was not in the book, but only because he acted differently because of the blood and the shield, which created obstacles and misunderstandings when they thought that he-she meant one thing, but in fact another. As soon as they started communicating, they both started having adoring thoughts about each other.
BishPlease23 chapter 43 . 9/5/2023
write-this-song chapter 43 . 1/24/2023
Um… but but but
whiskey chapter 27 . 12/23/2022
I love, love, love how well developed Rosalie is. I love how she is bitter but she has moved from that. I love how Jacob and her have bonded over their love for cars. I love how her mothering instinct comes out for gangly and lonely teenagers too.
April Sunshine chapter 43 . 9/13/2022
I love this story! I hope you will update soon, but I know that life gets in the way sometimes. Great job!
taj14 chapter 43 . 7/12/2022
Thank you for this amazing story!
apocalypse611 chapter 43 . 6/24/2022
I stumbled on this gem after a really long time and I know that I am very late in joining the party. I just finished this and I know it’s been a long time since you have updated this, I hope you will return to this one day! Hope you are doing well!
This really is an amazing story!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2022
Ok I do really like your story and all the sweet fluffy and romantic moments between Edward and Bella. But I don't like how much quality alone time is taken away from them by his family and the wolves etc.
I mean I do for the most part like your lemons but I wish we could also have longer more intimate conversations between Edward and Bella that was not about sex.
I mean, for starters, you sort of skipped over what could have been some deep meaningful conversations that Bella and Edward could have by doing your little 20 questions and it was just to fast and not detailed.
I mean, Bella must have alot of hurt in her by how neglectful her parents have been with her growing up.
For starters she could told Edward in more detail about how she came to play the role as parent child growing up with a flaky mother.
I mean it sounded like Bella was often left to her own devices and if she didn't cook then she would have starved. Her having to probably run the house and cook and clean and pock up grocery and make sure the bills got pallid because Renee might not gave thought of that too much and she probably and Bella had to make sure that the bills was paid and the groceries were bought before Renee spent alot of money on stuff they didn't need.
And you could explain how that made Bella feel unloved from her mother and father bevause at times cause Charlie probably stayed in Forks and didn't go and visit Bella as often as he could have.
He didn't call much and when he did call it was like strangers talking and it got awkward fast.
I know this for a fact because my mother raised me and my father didn't and you have to EARN THE RIGHT to be called father or daddy and simce my father was never around I called him by his first name.
It was only when I was an adult did he finally start putting a little effort into seeing me and spending quality time with me that I finally felt comfortable calling him Daddy.
But still he is no Andy Griffith type of father. Amd I still don't have as close of a bond with him like I do with my mother.
And I didn't trust mean for a long time because if my own father could abandon me than any man could. I also had a fear of marriage but after dating my future husband for 2 years I trusted him and we did get married.
He was 7 years older than me and I did marry young and we have been together for 17 years now.
Our age difference never bothered us.
And I didn't like guys my age back when I was in my late teens because they were immature and silly and they were not always looking for a long term commitment like I was.
So that is why when I befriended my husband over time our friendship flgrew to something more and we had the same likes and our morals and faith and principles was the same. And he was not some silly teen boy. He was 26 years old when I married him and he had already been to college and had a house and was settled down and ready for marriage and we did fall inlove and knowing how responsible he was and that he was not fickle helped me trust in him and feel safe and secured and loved.
And that's not easy for to do for a woman who has daddy issues and has been abandoned by her father and has insecurities.
I understand why Bella likes to be in control and doesn't like surprises.
So that way she doesn't fall down so easily when the rug is ripped out from underneath her.

Seriously Edward and Bella needed to talk more about this.
He didn't go into any long deeper conversations with her to help calm her fears about marriage and that they would not end up like Renee and Charlie...

And also Edward has lived for 100 years, and yes I think it's great that he has welced her to read his journals. But I also think he should have told her more about his life both as a human and as a vampire.
You sort of just skipped that part.

And yes I do like the lemons between them for the most part.
However you lost me big time when Edward read in Bella's mind that she one time watched a little porn by accident. And it was a bunch of cussing and filthy and she didn't even sound interested or impressed in it.
However Edward sort of pushed the issue and only got mad and told her to watch porn without him and Bwlla was like really and he said, Yeah it could be fun.
All the while he is having sex with her!
Seriously, I can tell you Wright now that having had insecurities where a man was concerned as I have and as Bella and other women have had, if our boyfriend or husband suggests porn especially while having sex with us, how in the hell do you think that would make us feel?!
I would have been so angry steamed would have blown our my ears!
For one it is crude and makes men and women out like they are just a bunch of meat to be and degraded.
And Edward is suppose to be a gentleman with morals ywt he has already had Bella before they were married.
And now he is ready to watch porn?
This is NOT our beloved Edward. Infact I'm disgusted and have quickly been turned off this book of yours because now it's starting to turn into Fifty Shades of Grey meets Good Will Humping...
I mean I have really liked your lemons so far up until that point when porn was mentioned.
I mean Edward and Bella are soul mates and Edward has never loved or desired any other woman than Bella.
So why in the hell now that he has his precious mate does he want to look at a bunch of naked women getting it own and getting banged by numerous guys?

Seriously I hope you paint Edward and Bella in a different light.
I don't think Bella would have liked Edward's suggestion.
She would have been naturally hurt and offended as if she wasn't enough for her mate that he now needed to look at naked women to get turned on as well.
I mean there is nothing wrong with having se fun in the bedroom but keep other people and porn the HELL OUT of your bedroom and relationship.
I'm actually debating whether or not to combine to read your story.
Because what the hell else will Edward suggest in the future? A threescore?
Going to a strip club? No no no!
The reason we love and adore Edward is because he is unlike these heathen men today.
He is actually a sweet,.kind and loving gentleman
The kind of guy who saved his virginity for his wife. The kind of guy who didn't go to stripclubs or watch porn.
What the hell were you thinking throwing porn into this story?
Edward is now tainted and I don't like this at all.
Please fix this and keep this nasty perverted Edward out of your other stories please.
Guest chapter 43 . 5/9/2022
Still loving this story…..still hoping you’ll continue it one day!
Hope you are well. Thanks!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/12/2022
I really like this story but Bella sure does complain and argue.
laura lou who chapter 43 . 2/5/2022
I didn’t realize this wasn’t finished when I started reading. It is soooo good! It’s been 8 years without an update, which I’m sad about. I hope this one day gets finished. We don’t even know about the Vanquish!
lozzie84 chapter 43 . 9/29/2021
Stumbled across this and it’s fantastic. Any chance of updates?
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 2 . 8/10/2021
I miss this story so much! Keep holding out hope that it will still be completed one day.
atouchofcitron chapter 1 . 7/24/2021
i wasn't sure what to expect when i started this story, but as soon as it diverged, i was/am hooked. imagine my overwhelming sadness when discovering that this is unfinished. nevertheless, 43 chapters of this writing and story will be bliss. i can't wait.
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