This was just incredible. In the end, the way the brothers differ from different perspectives was very well-done. You captured how people see them one way and others see them in a different way.
( Spoilers for the fic if you haven't read it yet)

I did find some errors, though.
"By now, Impalas and Mustangs and Firebirds are legendary themselves though." I think that there was supposed to be a comma before "though", but I'm not sure.
"They pay generously, but their money turns to pebbles and leafs once they are out of sight." The plural version of leaf is leaves.
"Either way, when the one who survived realized what'd done, he lay down and died next to his brother's body." The "lay" should have been in the past tense so "laid" would have been better.
"Just lay down and died." The same here.

Still, it was a very enjoyable read.

I've caught on a bit late, but this. This was beautiful. Perfect. Loved the fitting descriptions of the brothers. And just everything in this story. Wonderful. There may or may not be tears in my eyes...

That was AMAZING! love the legends spin on the story. Thanks

*raises glass*

ahhh!

now that's the stuff of stories! :)

Nice.

love it

Ah! That was crazy good! The best future-fic I've read in this genre. I love the vagueness and mystery in it. Great job!

Beautiful. Just amazing.

Mind censors can be tricky. It can be good, though, like with this fic. Very entertaining all the way through. It's like a giant game of telephone in a post-apocalyptic world.

I don't remember which circles are Special Hell and Regular Hell, but if you have to go to either, I'm glad you wrote this beforehand. Your presumably malfunctioning mind seems very creative. :)

I like the tone of your writing, I like the atmosphere, the stories and how they change, and particularly your synopsis. It grabs the attention, and it's interesting all by itself.

Poor Oxford is gone. It's such a nice place, too.

Very amusing. Thanks for writing.

Fotobow

It's kind of random, but one thing I really, really like about this is how much in someways it echoes the really old folk tales, with the (safe) inside/ (monstrous) outside paradigm (rather than the more modern good/evil). It gives it a sort of mythic resonance.

I liked it. I have always been a fan of Future!fics. Have a few posted myself and I know that they are always a lot of fun to write because there is nothing to hold you back. You have done very well here.

Though the girl thing was a bit weird, but I can totally see Dean doing something like that.

-Lover of Angelus

Simply awesome!

You are an excellent writer. Not just with this story, although this is my favorite of the stuff of your's that I've read, but with most of the things I've read by you. Well done.

I loved the toying with the ideas of Story and Legend, as well as the melencholy feel of it all. Very well done. I enjoyed it, and I don't usually like fan-fiction at all.

Okay, you've written some really good stuff here already-but this tops it all. Honestly, this is amazing. I absolutely love the internal contradictions that you included. Legends are like that, and they *are* all true, even when they can't all be.

Some of my favorite points:

The subtle hints about the state of the world (Firebirds and Impalas being legendary, nothing over the sea except monsters so obviously the younger one can't have studied there).

The confusion of what gender the Winchesters might have been and what their relationship might have been (I'm violently allergic to anything that hints of slash, so that's saying something).

The line about not being able to be that awesome without getting on the wrong side of the law

the line abut fighting over the fate of the world or the last French fry.

The line about what each's charm was (out of money or pants, out of hearts)-that captures Sam and Dean perfectly, in my opinion.

Overall, it's an absolutely amazing story. The mournful, wistful, yet somehow hopeful tone strikes me as just right, and the epic scale works perfectly. If this is what happens when you turn your internal censor off, I'd be happy to see more! Excellently done.