Reviews for Lost
animegirl336 chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I've always imagined different scenarios of Dende like this sorta. Like, he was so young when he became guardian, only ten, so of course he'd have issues bearing the burden, just like all those Gohan angst fics
Fly Dragon chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
This so adorable! A beautifully written story, that opens your eyes to the relationship Piccolo and Dende have! Please wright more of these storys with them! XD
duckie lover 151 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Very nice. :) I liked it.

Keep writing!

(On a bit of a random thought I was listening to Louder Than Thunder as I read this and was surprised by how well it fit. It sort of just completed the image/experience for me. )
NaaraHatake chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Aw, Piccolo cares! I loves it!
mrs.pcollo chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
this story isnt good enough to be a one shot...its good enough to be a full story please finish it :D
Elysees chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
This was so sweet!

I love the way you were able to make such a

lovely, sweet and yet slightly angsty story

without making either Piccolo or Dende OOC :)

It had just the right amount of angst! Just the right amount of fluff! Included two of my absolute favorite characters from DBZ AND a happy ending! I could not possibly ask for more in a fic

Good job! Faved! :D
luvondarox chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
This is adorable, and a fantastic read. I love how you kept Piccolo in character while still exploring his emotions.
Destiny Girl 15 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
This was really interesting! A sort of view of what goes on up there on the lookout - it was really great!:D
zara2148 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Aww, how cute. And was that a cameo by Kami I spotted?
Sleepy Alien chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I found this story pleasantly refreshing and well-written. The whole Piccolo-hit-Dende thing was perhaps the most emotionally involving, since you managed to capture the contrast between the two of them beautifully: the seasoned warrior and the young healer-guardian. I'd really like to see more of this sort of fanfiction!
GIEGIE chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Sweet.
Flonne chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I really love it, you manage the relationtip very good. congratz!

And sorry form my english xDU im not good at it.
InspiredDelinquent chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
very cute! i loved piccolo in this. and i liked how you expressed how they interact with each other.
Piccolo is green chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Cute! I loved it :D Great idea to show Dende at work!