Reviews for Donatello's Quest for Coffee
Weeglyfeesh chapter 1 . 7/30
This makes me laugh everytime I see it. (LOVE the french toast part XD) Good work! Keep it up!
willowplwm chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
*lengthy exhale*
This was SOOOO original, not to mention comedic. I loved the parser, though I'm not familiar with these kinds of games, and the way this was written was just AWESOME. You DESERVED that Best Comedy award, this is the coolest thing ever.
Aquamarine1212 chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
First off, this was HILARIOUS!
I'm a little too young to have much experience with these kinds of games, but I caught onto the mechanics pretty quickly. I read through this last night and I could hardly keep myself from laughing and waking up my sister. :) I love your sense of humor, it's dry at some points and ridiculous at others. Writing it in this style not only made it stand apart, but I think also added to the overall hilarity. I would legitimately play this game if it were real, just for those snarky comebacks from the parser. I think the only mild critique I can say about this is the passages when entering rooms made it a bit repetitive at a few points, but there was really nothing you could have done to avoid that. It didn't detract from the story at all - it probably actually made it feel more like an INFOCOM adventure game. So, I guess it's not really a critique. Also, it made for a good joke when the player got irritated with it too. I think one of my favorite bits was when the player tried to disguise themselves with the pigeon puppet. I also loved how the solutions to pretty much all the problems in the game were outlandish and would not be the first thing you would think of. (ex: the french toast)
This is probably the funniest fanfiction I've found in this site, so congrats! Keep up the great writing!
colombina chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Awesome game, but it was slightly anti-climactic. If this actualy becomes a game it should follow this plot
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
This was hilarious! I was dying! Great job!
RobinGibbDonnie chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
TigerThief chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Loved it, fun story! :)
GuestGirl chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
This story is ALWAYS a fun read! I think the part that always gets me the most is when Casey is the only one to spot Don's disguise. That, and I really enjoy those ridiculous problems and solutions that can only happen because it's a text adventure game.

Also, I really like how the characters are mostly in character in what they say and how they act, even though they keep breaking the fourth wall. Great job with that!
AwesomePineapple chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
Oh, my gosh. That was one of the best things I've read! It was hilarious and awesome. I loved the parser. The story was fun and totally brilliant! You should make the ones for Leonardo, Raphael, Michelangelo, and Master Splinter...that is if you didn't already write them. I mean, I am writing this review in 2015...whatever. You are awesome. Your fanfiction is awesome. I am going to spontaneously combust! I love you! (not really, it's just that I haven't been able to find any good things to read whether they were books or fanfictions) I am not sure if I have said this already but you are awesome!

P.S. You're awesome! :P
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
This is the best fanfic I have ever read!
flikaroo chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
I re-read this story whenever I need a smile to brighten my day. I remember how frustrating those games used to be to play. Your portrayal was perfect and I would really like to see similar one's with the other turtles sometime.
Piper chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
I absolutely loves this! I would like to play coughcoughreadcoughcough Raph, Leo, or Master Splinter's as well.
Zelgadis55 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Omg! That was hilarious. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, though I have to admit I was sceptical at first but decided to give it a chance after enjoying 2 of your other TMNT fics.
Awfully Wee Billy Bigchin chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
This is so beyond awesome. Can you PLeASe write Michelangelo's Quest for Pizza, Raphael's Quest for Beer, Leonardo's Quest for That Book He Wanted To Read But Can't Remember The Title Off and Splinter's Quest for a Good Place to Meditate please please please please please? I would favorite them all! Promise!
Itarily chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
...can this be a real game? Please? In all seriousness though, awesome fic. You did a very good job in writing it and you succeeded in making me laugh. Thank you!
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