Reviews for Slow Dancing in a Burning Room
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
chapter 1

Lets get real here. I would NEVER, NEVER, in my most fucked up nightmares say the kinds of embarrassing things Bella said to Edward to my Ex.

The shards of pain he left behind? That she died, that she is not worthy of anyone? OMG even if that's how she feels, you don't tell your EX that! Cause if your dumb enough to say such stupid shit you come off just looking like a stupid drama queen! You are supposed to win the break up not tell the asshole how lame and "broken" you are.

And really, if a man can "break" you then you were never a woman in the first place.
jk chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
I don't get it. Bella is allowing Edward to ruin her life and ruin all these guys. She tells Edward that she "died"! LOL really? really bella? how exactly are you dead? dumb bitch. so what! a guy left your ass...booooo fucking hooo
LolaTheSa chapter 5 . 3/30/2015
Wtf? He left her for what? 4 years? She just ran from him for 40 years for absolutely nothing. She did absolutely shit in her time apart from him other then bitch and moan about the hurt and all other absolutely BS that makes no sense. Now we're suppose to believe they just got back together so fucking easy? Fuck this Bella honestly.
LolaTheSa chapter 4 . 3/30/2015
Really, this is a frustrating story, bella doing nothing but going in fucking circles. And OH MY GAWD, he left her! She can't forgive him for 100 eternity cause his fears for HER got the better of him.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2014
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 5 . 12/14/2013
Amazing story! This made me cry so many times. I don't know if it's because of the emotions or if it's just because I'm tired, but this has got to be one of my favourite stories of reuniting ever. You captured their emotions amazingly. I think that Bella's change in personality after Edward left might have been a bit far-fetched, but you gave lots of reasons for it so I'm now buying it as a possibility for what could have been. Her reaction to seeing him again after the change and not wanting to be near him for fear of her own reaction is totally realistic. After three years of letting hurt build up like that, and then you find out that those years were the result of a major miscalculation... conflicting emotions are totally believable. I'll read this again tomorrow when I have a clear head.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
kikistimi chapter 5 . 4/24/2013
I really liked it. A Bella that can hold grudges!
jesszilla chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I like this Bella better for some reason than the annoying depressed one.
pauleen chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
Very angst yet powerful. A very good short story.
love bite chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
I am so glad you chose to finish this fic. It was really beautiful. Even though I would have loved more development of Bella's gift and to know what all happened in the intervening 30-40 years they were apart, it is still a beautiful and well-written fic.

thanks for sharing!
misswella chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
Marble Meadow chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
Awwww. / I don't know how I feel. Sad but at the same time satisfied? I think Bella really needed those however many years to heal. I'm glad that they found each other again.
Marble Meadow chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
I do like this chapter. I guess it bugs me that in the Twi-Universe, vamps don't really remember a lot from their human lives. I had hoped Bella would retain more. I suppose if this were to be an epic tale of 100 chapters or something it might have been different so I guess I'll take what I can get and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Marble Meadow chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Oh my GOD. This chapter captivated and traumatized me all at once. I got so emotional when he changed her that I had to go talk to my husband about it and grab a glass of wine! What an ASSHOLE. Sorry. Anyway - I guess I have to be glad he did do it - because she doesn't know how much he really does love her but that one scene was so hard to take because I really felt how Bella was feeling in that moment. You brought us there with you. I can't wait to see where you take us next.
Ravenous Vamp chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
I can't say this is my favorite ending but at least it is hopeful.
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