|Reviews for Punished|
| eftela chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
I need a sequel!
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
o/o wow. thanks for sharing!
| Vera Rozalsky chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Really warped, nasty, with consent dubious at very best. _Both_ principals in this scene are sick and twisted, and I like the hint at Draco's impacted self-loathing (when he shows the Dark Mark).
And the last bit... it's the beginning of, er, some kind of relationship.
Yuck. Very squicky, very well done. What more can I say?
| JemGirl77 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Interesting. ... Interesting. ( I feel like a shrink saying that)
What can I say without stating what is glaringly plain?
I like it? I do. And I do understand it from Harry's POV.
One, I didn't expect the blood, but I know why it's there.
Two, the plot was a surprise. I thought they already had a thing going from what I read of the story summery.
Three, I like the time. It's around this time I would expect things to start turning 'that' way for the two of them. I just wished that Draco didn't hate him still. Not your story of course or you wouldn't have a story.
Well, not what I was looking, but glad I found it all the same. :)
| Love From A Muggle chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Wow. Well written.
| AnExpressionOfWisdom chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Draco was just cruel! Poor Harry *grins wickedly*
| roddie4423 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
please finish this story please!
| haiylighGIRL chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
PLEASE PLEASE CAN U FINISH THIS STORY MORE PUNISHMENT PLEASE!
| verity candor chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Whooee... heehee. That was obviously lots of fun to read...but also very humorous... hm.
| RavenclawRebel chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Wow... I liked this...
| SwarmOfFanGirls chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Ooh, love it!
From Me x
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Consider me corrupted. I'm not supposed to like stuff like this.
Do I blame you or Suzanne?
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
| respitechristopher chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Scarred for life? Honey, I'm not sure how much is left that's unscarred.
This? Beautiful in its minimalist depravity. There's no set up (although I *do* imagine that it's a sixth-year thing), we don't even know which bathroom this took place in. All we get is the sex. The kind of angry, brutal sex that reminds you why they call it "fucking" in the first place. Not a rose petal in sight.
The sex is blisteringly hot, but I'm sure you knew that anyway. A more than commendable job writing about body parts that you don't have (something I've personally balked on in the past, but we've been through that). I'm a bit worried that it'd get removed, actually, but you have plenty of other places to post.
And hey, you got me to review a Harry/Draco. That doesn't happen every day...
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
People, feel free to PM me with any grievances; I told her to publish this dark little jewel :-D
Sara, I love you. I love your twisted, little brain, willing to take any half-baked fandom cliche and spin it into white-hot gold. Yes, the-Boy-Who-Is-Consent-Impaired shags a ferret and likes it, and it's just freakin' glorious, whatever the reasonings are.
Go slashfic! Slash just rules the world!
I do fear for my soul, though. At least I'll be sitting right next to you in H-E-L-L!
And this is wonderful. Despite the disaster of a plotbunny. It's amazing!