|Reviews for The Supernaturalists and the Omega Crisis|
| Cap'n Clueless chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
Her name is Ellen Faustino. Why do u have it as Ellen Foster?
| Cap'n Clueless chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
A) Guys don't have wombs. Other than that, nice job
| Hiatus-Aren't-Hiakus chapter 3 . 11/20/2009
This chapter is a lot better than the previous ones, good :) I like the bus concept, adds to the atmosphere of the City. Your grammar has improved in this chapter too, as well as some marvelous description, continue with that. :)
| Hiatus-Aren't-Hiakus chapter 2 . 11/20/2009
This is good so far, but it's Thief, not Theif. I before E except after C and all. Couple of errors in the first chapter..work on your description more. Good idea though, original.
| DarkLabel786 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Sorry about not having any updates for a while. I do plan on finishing the story soon as it is shaping up to be interesting. This will help me to begin developing my own tales as it serves me as good practice.
| change profile chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
I honestly hope that you finish this.
| change profile chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
| Rager13 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
First paragraph. It's malicious not malignant.
| fiatlux3721 chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
I like the Thieves' Guild idea. The writing is good-could use more commas. And remember-PAST TENSE!
| person chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
its really good so far. keep it up.