Reviews for Dark and Light
Basill chapter 30 . 9/4/2009
I almost feel bad for Moody, ALMOST being the key word, lol. I love this story and am glad you updated. :)
David305 chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
A story full of mistakes is unnecessarily hard to read, and the mistakes distract from the flow of the story. A well-edited story flows easily, and the reader is more readily absorbed into it.

I urge you, once again, to get a beta reader. They will edit your story and remove all these mistakes for free.

“These are our tongue toffees!-” Ton-Tongue Toffees

"He had no interest in joining though." in entering

"saw no need too" to

("Too" means also, or exceedingly.)

"The prospect of Drumstrang" Durmstrang

'“D?” Dumbledore question in confusion.' questioned

'“The Dursely’s signed' The Dursleys (no apostrophe)

“I hated the Durselys, and the Durselys hated me.” Dursleys

"Madam Maxine, headmistress of Beauxbaton." Maxime , Beauxbatons

"which looked to thin" too thin

"and Drumstrang students filed from the boat" Durmstrang

"brown hair sprinkled with greu" grey

"most of the students where eating" were eating

(Where means In what place; Were is the past tense of Are.)

"Rats are better then your food." better than

"How had someone taken that it the chaos?" in the chaos

"has more power and control then this" than this

"smiling as he school cheered her on" the school

"Harry walked down the isles" the aisle

"Madam Maxine yelled." Maxime

"plopped down on the love chair." loveseat
Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
awesome chapter. i cant wait to see what Harry does to Crouch Jr. personally i hope he lets Noir and Maen have there fun b4 killing him. update soon _ Ja.
IucunditaFloridus chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
nice, so Harry figured it out? update
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
I like it! **
mangagirl64 chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
happy soo happy, a new chapter of both damaged, and dark and light. i love it. one thing in damaged the battles u posted said naruto vs neji but didn't neji get knocked out with hinata in the first rounds. but both new chapters are awesome. who are u going to put under water for the second task. it would be funny if they tried to get count d under water. again i love your stories. (you'll probably hate me for this after all u just posted but...)i can't wait for the next chapters. i'm so excited about this stories. good luck
Faia Sakura chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
How lovely. I just always find this fic to be dark and lovely. The mood throughout is always done very nicely. _

Faia Sakura
Guest chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
Fleur eventually will learn of the fact that Harry's the one who saved her sister back in the Black Market, yes?

I hope you update soon.
peoplhi chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
this chapter is quite delicious. not much happened but harry figuring it out so early means there will definitely be something interesting coming up this year.
sanityisgone chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
Love it :)
May Eve chapter 30 . 9/3/2009
Hurray! Thank you so much for the update! -does a little dance-

-moans in pain- Grr. It's just not fair. -pouts- I love this story so much and I just wanna cry when each new chapter ends...-sobs- I think I could read this forever. Maybe I will. I can just keep reading it over and over and over and over and over...

Keep up the amazing work! Much love and adoration to ya.
Absolve chapter 29 . 9/2/2009
Wow I don't know what to say. This is truly just an amazing story.
Basill chapter 29 . 9/1/2009
Good chapter! I absolutely loved it! plz update soon!
Mya Uzo chapter 29 . 8/31/2009
Mcmllnchrstn91 chapter 29 . 8/31/2009
very good
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