Reviews for Dark and Light
Kyuubi04 chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
A Lovely and Enjoyable story... It is quite ensnaring, the way you wound the words together showing an entirely new perspective of what would have happened had Harry been much more affected by his relatives' maltreatment of him...

It is interesting how the story unravels and how detailed you are in most events...

But I'm curious, to be able to write something as intricate and dark-themed as this, you must be quite talented or does this story reflect a part of you?

You need not answer besides, I find it quite a good read...

Please do send me mail if you are to write more stories of the likes of this one...

I'll highly appreciate it...


history chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
I love a lot your story !
MarieVerdonck chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
Great new chapter! D is really encouraging his talents :) Of course, I liked the kiss :P Please update soon!

Colour-chan chapter 18 . 5/16/2009
wonderful story! truly enjoyable read! the style of writing really puts across Harry's lack of emotion, it works very well. I like the crosover with D, it seems to fit and doesn't sound too strange. Snape's character is really interesting. i thought the descriptions of the paintings were lovely too, i especially like Hedwig actually! keep writing and i can't wait for the next update!
WyntersDream chapter 18 . 5/15/2009
Wonderful, cant wait too see what happens next. I love the imagery used and the paintings. With such blood lust it is interesting that he didnt kill the dursleys... anyways instant favorite. Update when you can please.
GreatEnder chapter 18 . 5/15/2009
All that talent you gave harry wasn't just for show. you actually used the painting and music talents in the plot. I really like this story. Harry's interactions with snap and the headmaster is absolutely riveting. This turn of events with Tom is very concerning. The way harry is treating tom does not fit the characterization you have set so for. Tom tries to kill him and harry just lets that pass and even goes further to save, clean, and house him? The guy that killed a man for getting too close is doing this out of the blue! You quelled some of these out of character behavior with explaining that harry is trying to exploit Tom as his researcher. Since harry is stuck in Hogwarts it would be really helpful to have a smart mind doing some exploration of knowledge for him.

But what is harry doing with the kissing. He has shown no romantic interests before these two chapters. I do see what you did tho. In both occasions Tom was the instigator of the kiss and harry just stood there.

Is harry trying to use Tom's feeling for him to gain Tom's loyalty down the line? What ever it is please clear it up for us readers soon. I was hoping for a fic with very little romance or official pairing involved. Authors out there loose too many readers when they have their characters choose a specific pairing.
Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
Amazing, simply amazing. i LOVE ur fic. update soon _ Ja.
Sword'sfunPen'sbetter8P chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
Useless chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
I knew it. A fucking slash. Good lord, where is the original part of the story. More than half this site is composed of dark abused Harry who ends up getting fucked in the ass. Shit fucking Slash
Useless chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
This is fucking pathetic. If I wanted to read about a EMO or how someone abuse a kid I wouldn't come here to read this shit. You have him with a lot of power and he doesn't defend himself. Pitiful. Another story that shouldn't even see the light. I dont need to read the following chapters to see what happens because I can already tell. Anyway your writting is quite good, but the story just in the first chapter is disgusting.
doRodrigo chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
Sorry to know that there would be slash and now that I'm in love with your story I face myself with the forced decision to leave the story behind. Congratulation on the chapters, you write well enough except for a few minor mistakes and misspellings your story was very enjoyable. I would urge you to put that the story is SLASH in your summary now that you know that it will come to that so that people make the informed decision to read it, because I for one don't read slash. Again keep up the great work, and I hope in the future you will write stories that aren't slash.
Makurayami Ookami chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
well written. this was awesome.
xfighter4 chapter 17 . 5/13/2009
You Dumbass chapter 17 . 5/12/2009
Why ruin a decent story with some sick perverted slash. You f-ing loser.
Barranca chapter 17 . 5/12/2009
I do believe it would be in character for Tom to at most admit Harry is equal to him, not better. The guy has a complex the size of the North Pole, I don't think he would want to come off as inferior to anyone, especially as he already owes Harry so much. It was a smart move on Harry's part, saving Tom and sending him off to learn like that. He'll be a powerful ally. And was Lucius flirting with Harry? *shivers* The age difference is a bit much. I'll just keep believing he simply sees Harry as an interesting specimen.
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