|Reviews for The New and Improved Bella Swan|
| FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| Babynessa14 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
I think you did really good! I like how the story is going so far! and by the way was the guy edward? I think ur a great writer and ive been reading ur stories. your really good. continue writing! :)
| babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
omg wth? wow she really changed... and noone saw that? hmm? How about an Edward POV? Trying to fix her?
| Jackie2009 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I hope you decide to keep going!
| marcy86 chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Jeez Girl I almost had to take a ice cold shower after reading this story, my husband is out of town so you just gave me an idea of how to welcome him home.
| luvedwardcullen17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
that was awaesome u have to keep going with it
| A is for Angel chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
ok wow thats different
im speechless not in a badway but it was wow
r u sure this is your first lemon lol
ok other than that u did a good job