Reviews for Timeless
princess moon shadow chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Love it! Please update soon!
Xilex90 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
awesom chapter one!

keep up the good work

faved!
Shugocharagirl chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Great first chapter
arisu rin chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
This was good. Makes me feel like reading this series again.
FairyMagician chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Great first chapter! Can't wait for the next!
PiWrite chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
The story is very... dramatic! :)
CrimsonBloodGoddess chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Really nice. I liked it a lot.
Skyzyz Kittyfish chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
haa? you havent updated this story for ages! are you going to write those next chapters? plz?
Akizakura202 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Excellent story! I am in great anticipation for the next chapter, though I see you have not updated since March! The injustice XD!

Someone messaged me, asking me to read this story and leave a review in hopes that you may be motivated into updating; well, I do hope it does some good. I have not read many Matantei Loki Ragnorok fanfictions-in fact, this would be my first-but I am very glad that I put off my History project for this :)

There were some portions in which you were mixing up past and present tense; generally in a third person POV, one is meant to favor the past tense, saying "was" instead of "is" and "had" instead of "has." A few awkward sentences were interspersed here and there, but not prevalently enough to ruin the overall piece.

I can't wait for the next update :D!

Valedictions,

Aki
odagiriryu chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
yo.. well princesa de la Luna recommended yer story to me...

um... it's not bad...

hope ye'll continue with de next 2 chaps...
sneaky.silent.ninja chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
interesting. very nice story :)
The Duelist of Dawn chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This is great! I feel this story could be more than a threeshot and into a longer story! Can't wait to see how the dreams Spica's been having tie in, even though I have a guess. Great Opening!
W2 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
it is the best story of Loki x Spica i had read! please please please dont let it hang like that, it will make me go nut X.
ShoujoAnimeFanatic13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
THIS FIC IS AWESOME!

SASUGI KARIN-SAMA!

ITS VERY NICE!

I hope you make it a story instead of a three shot, but it is up to you to decide

anyways

I REALY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

I NEED TO SEE LOKI AND SPICA!

LokiSpica FLUFF ARE JUST TOO GOOD!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
waterlily0777 chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
good so far! _ dying to know what happens next
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